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| "Botch Up" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: D-Reaper Originalle [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
How sadistic! I feel so bad for James. I guess everything can't end happily... Now for the review: Did you spell check before posting this? If you don't want anyone proofreading for you then you really should bite the bullet and do it yourself- I hate to do that, but I do it the best I can... Seemed kind of rushed, and not in a PWP way. Hey, at least it's readable! Opinion-y:The idea was sort of cliché but this is one of few fics that go into it. I wouldn't have the guts to be so evil, but hey; someone had to write it... Hope you take my constructive criticism to heart instead of taking offense... Best of luck in your future works!
| Title: hey
Reviewed By: THE_OTAKU On: June 03, 2004 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad
| Reviewed By: Clue On: June 10, 2003 12:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think your story is soooo good! It is also funny. I LUV butch/james pairings! Your fic is awesome! keep it up! |
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