| "Beginning" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: En Satsu Koku Ryuu Ha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2004 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If one word could describe this fic, it would have to be, incredible. The twist was great, i never thought that gohan was accualy his grandfather. I think it would be awesome if you made a sequal. This was just incredible. Incredible is the only word i can think of that accurally describes this. Please do everyone a HUGE favor, and create a sequal. Yea i know its a lot of your work on your part, but i would deffinetly read it! Keep up the great work, and continue writing. :) Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Kegger007 On: October 01, 2003 17:54 CDT
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That was a beautiful subchapter for this story. I wan't expecting an addition the this particular work of yours, but I like this one. Keep up the good work a please continue your Vegeta fic! Pleeaase! Peace!
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Reviewed By: Ominous Prophecy On: September 27, 2003 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yipee!!! Finally somebody that agrees with me that Gohan's character was done an injustice from the high school years and on... He was so cool up until the end of the Cell saga. What happened?! I'm no Videl fan either so horay for you for scrapping her ass ^_^ This is the first Gohan fic I've ever read and I'm glad I did. It's brilliant, simply brilliant!
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Reviewed By: GreenEyes276 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 00:26 CDT
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Well, Kegger said it better than I could. This was a great story over all and I like how you ended it. I too didnt see that coming, Gohan being his own Grandfather. Nice twist.
I am impressed with your writting skills as well. My own stories dont flow this smoothly. Keep it up! =o) Please update me on your other stories. Heres my email: greeneyes276@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: Kegger007 On: April 30, 2003 19:31 CDT
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Once again, I am amazed by your writing ability and the style of writing. Chapter Eight was very well written. This story has been a very good read for me, and I was just wondering, how did you refine your writing skills to such a level? The story is very well thought out, and each chapter is of a large size! Nothing seems to be rushed, and no idea is out of place. I must commend you on your ability to give us a look at the inside of Gohan's mind, and the way the mind will work to protect itself from emotional hurt. Once again, an enthralling story, keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: GreenEyes On: April 29, 2003 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEEK!!
Good chapter!! So the next one is gonna be that last? Awe okay. It was great reading, though, so I wait for the conclusion! =o)
I reeaaaaally like Gohan and you did a good job portraying his emotions, thoughts and the struggles he has to deal with. I love Gohan torture fics! *giggles* |
Reviewed By: GreenEyes On: April 09, 2003 23:55 CDT
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This is very good! I look forward to the next chapter. Great job! =o) |
Reviewed By: Kegger007 On: April 06, 2003 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good fic! I've been waiting for updates, so pleeease don't stop writing! I hate it when authors write really good fics, then suspend them for long periods of time! Keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: phoenix1 On: April 05, 2003 17:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Only one person has reviewed this?!? That is an outrage. It is a wonderful story. Was just a bit difficult to understand when Gohan first went to planet Vegeta. Please continue. |
Reviewed By: AnimeFan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 12:57 CST
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This is actually very good!! You can get a clear image of what's going on in the story. Very nice. |
Reviewed By: Kegger007 On: June 02, 2003 18:03 CDT
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Wow. Just wow. A stunning conclusion to an intriguing story. When I read that you had an unexpected twist, I figured it was something about him becoming Supreme God, but I didn't expect the dream finish. I can understand why there would need to be a new God, the Kai's seem to age, so why wouldn't the Supreme God? The only part of the story that really threw me for a loop was the fact that Gohan was his own grandfather. Up till that point, I had assumed that Bardoku was just Gohan's amnesiac form that appeared on Vegeta-sei after he escaped from Denna, and that the locked away portion of the mind was just the side that makes Gohan cold blooded in battle. A great bit of story telling! You should finish all of your works, they are very good! (Except for the German ones, I can't understand German, well except for Rammstein! lol) |
