"Twilight Sky" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: kato-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 10:27 CDT Comment/Review: This was an unbelievable sequel to the original masterpiece. I noticed there is a second sequel in the works, but I'll wait until you're finished before I delve into it. Thanks for an awesome read.
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Reviewed By: Destiny's lot On: July 05, 2003 00:07 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Another great chapter. The wyrn thing was kinda scare, I kept think about a cross between the monsters from Ghost hunters and the x-files fountain of youth creatures. *shiver* |
Reviewed By: Kato-chan On: July 04, 2003 13:52 CDT Comment/Review: Wow, you're really doing an excellent job in weaving this story. I wish they had animated THIS story (and pain, joy, life) before they got to events in the anime. It's amazing. You get into their heads and make these characters three dimensional. This is truly one of the best works I've read. |
Reviewed By: Destiny's lot On: June 29, 2003 03:14 CDT Comment/Review: Wow a lot happening in that chapter. I liked Lai lai's part a lot, it was very sweet and showed a whole new side to Shuten. Touma so logical.
Great work, keep it up. |
Reviewed By: kato-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 11:17 CDT Comment/Review: I really love the way you're developing the characters and slowly getting the guys prepared for the future events in the anime.
Poor Ryo! He's my favorite and you're doing an awesome job with him as well as the others. I never thought I'd like SchuxSeiji but you make it work so incredibly well while keeping them both in character. Wow!
This whole series has really demonstrated the type of bond the 5 have created among themselves and how strong it is becoming. This is an unbelievable piece of work and I can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Destiny's lot On: April 08, 2003 21:48 CDT Comment/Review: I'm glad you back tracked, it gives the story more depth and feeling. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Ja ne |
Reviewed By: queixo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 10:06 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: you really need to hurry up and put out some more chapters cos you can't leave us in suspense for too long.
love it! |
Reviewed By: Destiny's lot On: March 16, 2003 01:15 CST Comment/Review: Chapter 4! Chapter 4!
Anubis really wants him does he? You expressed that really well by the way. You've got a great style and I'll be checking for chapter 5 soon. |
Reviewed By: kato-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 20:34 CST Comment/Review: I'm so glad you're continuing. This is a good start. I like the fact that the MaSho's were brought in and the 'series' is progressing. Vampires aren't really my thing but this is such a great fic and it's only one character who's a half-vamp that I don't mind. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Destiny's lot On: February 15, 2003 15:04 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: Yeah, vampires... the mashos and troopers what more can we ask for. I'm so glad you decide to keep going with this story. |