Reviewed By: SKMKRfanjoanna On: June 28, 2003 06:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's an okay fic but i think that the ending was too simple. mayb more events can b added after ascot arrives at umi's home... |
