| "Surviving Together" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Title: Brilliant
Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2009 03:40 CDT
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I've read this fic like a billion times. Sorry i'm just reviewing now, somehow never got around to do it. But i really really really love this fic. Brilliant work. You nailed both characters, and i escpesially like how the young Vegeta is... All just fits so well. Too bad you don't write anymore... *sighs*... Loved it....! If you ever write anymore, make an update on one of these fics - and tell me where and when. :P - Roar
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Title: Speechless
Reviewed By: Saiyuri [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 23:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know where to start. Thank you, first off, for making such a great story. I first read this on ASMR, and I was speechless...it was just so good. I was really sad when it wasn't there anymore but was happy to find that you posted it here. You have the characters down so well. I think this was one of the first B/V fanfics I read and I gained a whole new perspective on their unexpected relationship. I love how they came together, I love Vegeta's brash and asshole-like yet deeply caring character and I love Bulma's strong passion for him. This couldn't have been done any better. Thanx for the great fic! ^_^
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 09:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I must say, I have never had my brains poked, blended, and then handed back to me. *APPLAUSES* I read the trilogy and you had me from beginning to end hanging off a cliff thinking that it couldn't get any worse and you think of something else that can. *MORE APPLAUSES* This story was beautiful, very well orchastrated, and written. The most impressive story I've read so far of all the fan fics I've read for any anime. Give your self a pat on the back (if you already didn't). Look forward to reading your other works.
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Title: Surviving together
Reviewed By: chicharu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 07:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, that was one awesome story! liked the changes in the story, like I really thought vegeta was going to rape bulma and bulma would forever be zarbon's whore and everything =D really awesome, I really loved reading your story!
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Reviewed By: sveta89 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 17:50 CST
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XD
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Title: oi
Reviewed By: Ania D On: March 16, 2005 11:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, just look. I looove your storys...! I'm telling ya, I was about to flame you when I saw "The End" But, as you said, it's a trio, so I'am just gonna read the next one too. Love it. Kepp up. :-)
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Reviewed By: VegetasLindaLou On: January 26, 2005 14:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the Best fanfic of all times!! I have read alot of fics and all of your work, This is the best. Keep writing and i will keep reading!!
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko not signed in. On: December 09, 2004 11:49 CST
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i just read the story, it brought tears to my eyes.
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Title: grrrrr
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chii_otoko (not signed in) On: December 09, 2004 10:43 CST
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on fanfic net i was wanting to read ur stories, i wanted to read surviving together a new legacy, but when i read the sum, i relized it was a sequal, so i went to read the other surviving together on that site, finished it only to find it was the end of a trilogy, so basicly i read the end of a book now im going to read the begining.
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Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: Shinigami In The Form Of Me On: October 22, 2004 06:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all I'd like to thank you. This was the first fanfic I ever read and the reason I decided to start reading them. You changed my life and understanding of things. I didn't find this story on fanfiction.net and have gone two or three years without reading it. I have been reading fanfics and fanfiction.net for about two years now and it was just last night I remembered the reason I even read them and decided to see if you'd posted them here. I was overjoyed when I saw you had and have just re-read 'Surviving Together' this morning. I am deeply looking forward to reading the second and third parts of the trilogy and know they will be, if not better, just as exciting and interesting as the first. I am just about to read the second part but I thought I'd just thank you for changing my life. So once again thank you. Ps - I am considering joining fanfiction.net so look out for my fanfics. I'll be under the username Shinigami.
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Title: You are one of the best
Reviewed By: Kendra On: June 19, 2004 15:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I first read this story when it was posted on fanfiction.net. Eventhough you altered this version its still one of my favorite B/V fics.
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Reviewed By: Rae On: July 10, 2003 02:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't give a spelling and grammar rating cuz well I didn't notice. But I'm glad you spelled Vegeta's name like it is in the dubbed version it bugs me when its spelled Vejita. I love this fic! Its great! You're very talented. Vegeta and Bulma are my favorite. My friend thought I was nuts when I went gaga over Vegeta. She likes Goku. I have a thing for dark dangerous tortured souls. I think you do well with Vegeta's charcter. The tail was a cute touch! |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 13:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't even particularly care for this pairing and I still loved this story. You are truely a brilliant writer ^.~ A/U BxV rocks though. |
Reviewed By: sary yen On: June 27, 2003 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think this fanfic is really good i think the best part of this story is when they kill zarbon i wish the creator of this should make this a movie but i thing you might need to take out somethings so im going to start reading your sequals to this story i think you should be a writer oh yeah i also write stores about dbz espically b/v! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 19:20 CST
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OPH HHHHELLLLL NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! DONT U DARE FINISH THIS UPPPP!!!! I"LL SWEAR TO GOD I STRANGLE UUUUU! No I wont but PLEASE It cant end like this it just cccannnt!!! *sobs****!!!!!!!
PLEASE TELL ME THAT THERE IS A SEQUELLL!
IF IT IS II LOVEEEEUUUUUUUU!!!!!
Later!!! |
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