| "Surviving Together" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 13:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness! I was about to rant and rave and boo hoo about the sad yet hopeful ending, but there's more! I'm so excited. I really love this story, and I actually thought the ending was very appropriate. Anything else would've just been...unrealistic. Although I am still surprised that she killed her own brother, but I supposed under the circumstances, she had to do something. Anyway, great story and I look forward to the next installment. |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 12:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've done a magnificiant job! I can't wait to read and review the sequel! keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Buffyirl5009 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 12:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT!! THATS IT! WTF! IS WRONG WITH YOU! WRITE MORE NOW!! THIS IS TOO GOOD TO LET GO JUST LIKE THAT!!! GRRR!!! |
Reviewed By: bECcA On: March 06, 2003 20:02 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!!!! will bulma die???????? or will vegeta save her??? omg!! you MUST update SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! or else....... *pulls out knife* hehehehehehehhee... well update SOON!!1 payce outZ~! |
Reviewed By: DarkBulma On: March 05, 2003 23:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey what's up? Awww...how sad! I'm loving it keep on going can't wait til next chapter please update very soon! Loving the angst! udate soon Bye! Bye!
~^_-*~ |
Reviewed By: kureeji [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 21:36 CST
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Basically, this jsut keeps on getting better and better, lol. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 20:55 CST
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Aaaaah, Zarbon, you piece of shit!!!! I hate you! He has to die!!! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 20:53 CST
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This is too much for me okk!!!! *sniffsniff*
I cant take it shes so brave that greenfreak I hate Zarbon!!! I lothe the day I ever put him as a good guy in one of. ...... ummmm sorry but Goddanmit!! its not fucking fair!!!!!!!
Please update soon!!!!!
LATER!!! |
Reviewed By: Marajade187 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. It's really original considering how over-done some plots can get. You've been really good with updating...must have more!!! o.o Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 22:07 CST
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YUP I WOULDD LOVVEEEEEEE DO DIE WHILE MAKING LOVCE WITH VEGETA !! I'll die the happiests woman on the earth!!
*YEAH BABAY!!!!*
Well I loved the Chapy Please Update soon !!
Later!!!!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 20:19 CST
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That was an awesome chapter! Can't wait until the next one! |
Reviewed By: DarkBulma On: March 04, 2003 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man! Vegeta and Bulma are falling for each other. LoL Doing good so far keep it up! Can't wait til next chapter. Please update soon! Bye! Bye!
~^_-*~ |
Reviewed By: Kat On: March 04, 2003 17:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Rascal On: March 05, 2003 18:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! Some small spelling and grammar errors and it isn't very original but you have a nice way of telling a story and making your audience feel. Way to go! Write more, write often!
PS
I notice some reviewers gave you higher marks than I did. I use other fics I have read as a guide for my reviews. For me, Darke Angelus, Catgirl 26(Pseudo Ferocity) and Hella (An Alternate Love) are three of the best writers out there. (I have not read anything better than any of the fics Darke Angelus has written). Please look them up and read! You do a fine job, keep writing! |
Reviewed By: audreyt26 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Lemon! I've read this fic before and I was wondering if you had changed the lemon on this? Anyway, keep posting! |
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