| "You're My Love Forever Hiei" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Y.M.L.F.H.R
Reviewed By: unamed On: March 29, 2005 11:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey!!!!!! You want to know something? You changed chapter names. That's O.K. It's cool. You still have to work on your tense promble.
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Title: Y.M.L.F.H
Reviewed By: unamed On: March 28, 2005 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have some tense prombles in there, you know. You should edit a little more [not trying to be harsh]. I put those in there beacuse it wouldn't lst me not have them. I do like it a lot more though.
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 05:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a cute story. It takes a little bit to translate some of the comments/sentences though. |
