| "Entwined" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: rinsama---15 On: August 16, 2007 08:15 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice. This was great. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2006 20:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
cute ending. and i LOVE the idea of inuyasha calling kagome "kikyou" in a moment of passion. delicious.
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Reviewed By: FluffyKirara On: January 27, 2006 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was relly good!!!!i love the ending!!! but wheres the second part??? the only thing is the paragraphs were too long
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 03:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
i liked it. thanks. the end was cute. ~Dark Avenger
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Reviewed By: Relix On: December 02, 2003 02:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great :)
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Reviewed By: flyygirl On: October 20, 2003 09:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was a very sweet story. Please update.
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Reviewed By: razorbld On: February 16, 2003 15:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha waiting as so he could give Kagome the largest amount of pleasure^_^ that is so kind. It was great! You did good, but don't make the paragraphs so large, it made it hard to read. There was so much passion, that it blew the other lemons away almost to the point of it being purely romantic sex. not Hentai. I liked how Sango noticed that Kagome's skirt was inside out..._ Woah! Kagome, what have you and Inuyasha been doing!?
You're good at this. keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen On: February 16, 2003 13:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Comment/Review:
A first try? Not bad in that context. Try to work on that word repetition thing; it tends to distract. |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 On: February 16, 2003 05:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really well written |
Reviewed By: musechan On: February 16, 2003 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it. That was pure romance, and whoa! Did you have imagination. I Hope to hear more from you in the near future. |
