"Mahasamahdi" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: holly (ardicana@msn.com On: August 30, 2004 16:10 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: i love it so far. wonderful job. i did notice a few repeated spelling errors, and some mistakes in grammer. but it really didnt take much away from the story. you also changed tenses a few times mid chapter. wonderful job though. really. i like the style of writing. -holly
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Reviewed By: shani On: June 22, 2003 11:09 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i really like you fic. it is touching and has an intelligent plot. |
Reviewed By: papillon99 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 14:04 CDT Comment/Review: Wow...this is good...i like this!!!! |
Reviewed By: SilentWillow920 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 18:47 CDT Comment/Review: Mmmmnnnnnuuuuhhhh... Gonna be finnishing this any time soon? You really should... Leaving rabid Duo fans hanging like this is a great way to shorten your life span significantly...
Love the story. Keep going, alright? |