| "High Class Affair" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 15:54 CDT
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I certianly hope you continue this..PLEASEEE!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 23:46 CDT
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Yay! I finally found a Milphy/Marron pairing. Not that I have anything major against Gateau, it's just too easy and I really expect Marron to be interested in someone smarter.
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Reviewed By: Ro On: May 24, 2004 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
While it does seem a stretch at first, I could certainly imagine something like this happening with the language you use. You describe it well; I'd like to see how you continue with it! quoth_the_ro
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Reviewed By: yamikage On: September 29, 2003 11:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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oh my god! never think i will find mille-feuille/marron fic *_____* sankyu to write it please udapte soon and make a lot of chapter
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Reviewed By: doragon no kokoro On: September 29, 2003 07:37 CDT
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Please continue the story! Love to see where this is going. Love the Mille/Marron pairing too!
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Reviewed By: Wierd Meggin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, write more! The suspence is killing me. Lovely pairing, just adorable. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Chara On: April 05, 2003 15:43 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more please |
Reviewed By: T. Fox Emquiste On: March 20, 2003 21:20 CST
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YAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYY! Very GOOD Marron/Mille. Please write more!! |
Reviewed By: chahiya On: March 19, 2003 23:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading your story. Your muse smiles upon you. I look for to reading the continuation.
Chahiya :) |
Reviewed By: mysticrice On: March 08, 2003 23:42 CST
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I hate to say this but the story does seem trebly force after Millie and Marron get to the room. I do like the atmosphere you created at the start. especially w/ Tira, Gateau, & Cinnamon Tea and the mentions of Kahlua and Chiffon dropping the respectable adult front after the later half of the night sets in. |
Reviewed By: Tricia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 19:23 CST
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Well, duh, you have to continue! I think you portrayed Milphey great. He's so damned sexy. So more, more more!! |
Reviewed By: Fala T. On: February 22, 2003 20:56 CST
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Well this certainly is different! (yes that is a good thing). This new... dare I say... Masculine Milphey is rather alien, but interesting at least. Then again, the perky purple-haired pervert we all know and love does have his more austere, serious side (battle-mode). He's a man of many faces. One question... did Marron imbibe any of the alchohol at the party? It seems a little odd that he would accept Milphey's ::koff:: "invitation" just like that unless he was a little punch-drunk. I mean, look at how he responds to Gateau... Well, anyway... I like the bit about Milphey hugging Marron and being warm (that description gave me a few warm fuzzies too) and I really like all of the "I know a lot about you" stuff. Very cool and creepy and sweet and sexy ^_^ The last line has me particularly intrigued (as does M and M's reversal of who gets to be on top. Seme-Marron is a good thing ^___^). Please continue. This is great so far ^_- |
Reviewed By: myka [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 06:36 CST
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I understand what you meant when you said forced and unreal. It's a little at the
beggining but after the 'plot' is exposed it all works. Leaving you with something
very nicely written and entertaining too ^^
You even managed to open a new possibility...Marron as a seme to Mille...hmmm |
Reviewed By: DemonQueen17 On: February 18, 2003 09:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good beginning to this story. I really like the pairing too. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: EvilCacklingHippyOverlord On: February 16, 2003 20:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ woot! I've been looking for a M/M fic. This seems quite promising in the lemony area. As well as feed meh need for long haired bish. ::grins:: |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas On: February 17, 2003 10:32 CST
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I...LOVE...THIS... STORY!!!! *squeals* ^_^ Please continue it Miko, please please please! I want more! |
Reviewed By: The Luckdragon On: February 26, 2003 17:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to continue! Do a Milphey/Marron lemon, please? I can't find *any* good ones! *worships the Miko* |
