| "Cry To Tomorrow" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Kawaii_Cherry_Blossom On: April 25, 2003 09:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful. Just beautiful. |
Reviewed By: Shadow Prince On: April 07, 2003 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry that I didn't give you perfect but the rating system because useless if people always put in perfect ratings. Well I really liked that story. It was full of emotion, I could see Misty's teared streaked face. Perhaps you could change this story so that tis is the prologue and then start a continuation based on Misty fighting with her love for Ash and her own stubborn pride.
I would be happy to proofread someone who has talent like you. (www.bunnierabbot@hotmail.com) Please keep up the good work! I really mean it! |
