| "Here Kitty" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Ananda On: August 22, 2003 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI! Well, to explain my rating, the style of writing is cool. It makes you think, which is enjoyable. The spelling didn't get a 10 because I didn't notice anything wrong, but that doesn't mean nothing was. I'm bad with spelling, but good with grammer. Creativity is low because Omi(I think) kidnappings are all over the place. I'm sure it will get better the further along the story goes. I enjoyed it a lot, which is why I actually reviewed! I want to know what happens! |
Reviewed By: wolfraven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I certainly hope you decide to do more on this. I'd dearly love to read a serious 'petboy' fic featuring one of the Weiss boys.
Nice start, original idea. Quite a start not to have Schwarz as the chief heavies. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: wrathe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 19:13 CST
Comment/Review:
I want to know more. I think it is Omi based on the blue eyes, am I right? Will the others come back for him? Who was injured?
MORE!! |
Reviewed By: GardenProphet On: February 16, 2003 19:00 CST
Comment/Review:
alright, so I'm curious. What's going to happen? Keep it up! |
