| "Kitten" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Nobodynow On: February 06, 2005 16:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Continue! This is so interesting and I really want to know where it's going and how they save and/or defeat poor Ryou and Malik. The poor babies! But I feel more sorry for Mokuba and why does Seto hate him all of a sudden? Is it about the card or something else? Did you mention it in the story? I can't wait to see what happens and great emotions in chapter two totally nightmarish senaro. Everyone's worst fear. Update soon. Thank You. DK;)
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Reviewed By: suzaku priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 12:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mary-ohki:very, very good! I gave it a 9 on spelling and grammer because of some missing commas and junk,and the fact that Merik is actually spelled Marik, but that's because I'm overly aware of that...Ryou as a drug addicted kitten! How interesting! Thank goodness it was only Mokuba though, and not someone I actually like getting raped...oh wait, basicly my faves are Malik, Marik, Ryou, and Bakura, but Baku-baka's definatly my fave^-^*glomps*
Mia: Hikari, when will you give up on Bakura? It's really getting hopeless with you! anyway, that was the best fic ever! Always wanted to see Ryou like that...think you can follow it up with some fanart? |
Reviewed By: Sapphire On: March 02, 2003 10:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: ruby queen of evil [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 11:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so hooked on this fic....give me more man!!!
i need it!!! shakes like a junkie |
Reviewed By: sarah the yaoi fairy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2003 05:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sarah: This rules! I love it! I love the way Yugi acts. And the way you made Ryou into a drug addicted pet for Marik and Bakura. I absolutely adore the collar and earrings being the innocence that way torn from Ryou and Malik. It's a really original idea. I gave you a 9 on originality becase there are so many Ryou rape-fics out there, but that's the only reason. Everything else in the fic is really creative and deserves a 10!
Katarina: I hope you get the next chapter out soon. And don't be discouraged by the lack of reviews, this story is awesome!
Sarah: We'll be waiting.... ^_^
Sarah and Katarina |
Reviewed By: Kendra On: February 16, 2003 17:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my friggen god! That was one of the best rape fics i read in a while. Hurry up and put up the 4th chapter! |
