| "Present" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Rei On: August 11, 2003 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. I've only read the prologue -- that's all you need, really -- but it was hot. Very good. Glad you didn't use the same words over and over again. |
Reviewed By: Tony On: July 11, 2003 09:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. I printed it off last summer from shoujoai.com. it's funny as hell. and i just saved slippery when wet and am going to read it. This fic is funny and steamy at the same time, keep it up |
Reviewed By: WishIWasGuy On: June 17, 2003 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have written the best SF lemon I have ever read. Damn. Hot. Unsurpassibly good. Hella YEAH!!! |
