| "Unwanted" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Shattered Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 14:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes well it would be nice if I could read the reat of the story. Jeez! I've heard of keeping them in suspense but this is plain ridiculous!^_^
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Reviewed By: Ankou-Enoch On: December 21, 2003 08:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is good. I read all of(so far) G-men and had to read this. Please write more!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: HIEIhotsause On: October 16, 2003 17:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
you haven't updated this fic in sooo long. please, please, please, please! finish! i will do ANYTHING! how does being your eternal slave sound? huh? huh? who could resist a slave that is loyal to its master?!
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Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 09:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yikes. What an awful situation for the siblings to be in. It is awful to get your mouth washed out with soap. Bleah!
I do look forward to seeing more, and finding out how successful Hiei is in protecting Yukina. |
Reviewed By: little youkai On: June 06, 2003 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a great story. Very interesting. You must hurry and continue this story. I like how you wrote it. It goes well with the topic of child abuse. |
