| "Gypsy" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hani On: March 07, 2003 23:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Bah, not much time to review, here. I'm in the middle of having my mind numbed by video games. Great chapter, as usual. Keep up the good work! (I'll IM you later, and give you some decent praise.) |
Reviewed By: Hani On: February 28, 2003 19:39 CST
Comment/Review:
*Harass* KUREE!! Write MORE! You're torturing me, and I can tell that you love it... meanie. |
Reviewed By: SaiyanGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am very intrusted in this fic. The storyline is so well thought out and original. I am just wondering if it is a P/V? I happen to love them. Well, anyway, I am loving this fic. |
Reviewed By: wawashkeshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 22:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I couldn't find anything wrong with this story but the again, it was such a fascinating story I wasn't really paying attention to the grammar. When a story is this interesting, who cares if you have one comma out of place. Hope you have more of this story up soon. |
Reviewed By: Kinoko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 14:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEK!!
This chapter kicked butt, girl, you better watch your back if you don't want people stealing this idea from you...
It's that good!
I really liked the way you discribed the war Pan lived through, I give it a perfect ten in the detail department as well as everything else!!
Thanks for your 'apology' but it really wasen't needed, I compleatly understand what you were thinking when you read the whole thing, and I hold nothing against you.
You can be sure though that it's a pretty ugly thing that happened to Pan, or else it wouldn't be so dark and...well...dark.
And that remark that came out of Mulan, don't worry about it.
Just give me 10 points for noticing it, and then make it a coustem to put in movie quotes in your stoires and see if anyone picks them up like I did.
I thought it was neat, not that you copied Disney's idea.
Keep on typing as well as you do,
Kinoko |
Reviewed By: Kiyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 11:15 CST
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i like this story a lot. very interesting. i take it this is some sort of V/P get together? right? well it is certain;y original. it can't wait to read more.
Ja,
Kiyasha |
Reviewed By: WeaverOfDreams [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 06:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a very well thought out story. though Pan is not one of my fav characters in the whole Series, you did seem to represent her quite well. thanks for your Review to 'Love Song" btw, I have another story up, multi chapter. hope you read and enjoy that one too. thanks for the good read. |
Reviewed By: Blade On: February 18, 2003 21:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Holy halo'd has-been's, Batman!"
*deep and meaningful voice* The plot thickens. |
Reviewed By: Hani On: February 18, 2003 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kuree, Kuree... I've changed the direction of my internet fork from ff.net, to you. It was HORRIBLE of you to leave me like this... again. Terrible... inhumane. I demand that you write more, right this instant. After all... I AM the spoiled brat of the group, no? |
Reviewed By: Kinoko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good story you've got going there, I like Pan's attitude more than anything though, and also the refrences you make to other lines from movies.
like "Their dead, how lucky can they be." came from the movie Mulan.
And the whole thing about Trunks being the hero on the back of the cereal box, that was neat.
When you reviewed my story you said the Pan was a bit OOC...
well thats mostly because of what caused her to go into the pit of depression.
The real Pan that comes out on the T.V show would have lived a happy-go-lucky life, therefore never having to beare the pain that the Pan in my story has.
Did that even make sence? Maybe not, anyways I really enjoyed your story and I hope to see more soon,
Kinoko |
Reviewed By: Millie On: February 18, 2003 09:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this story is amazing! Where did you come up with this idea. Very cool...very cool...very cool lol ^^ |
Reviewed By: Rina_istorlle [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 09:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story! ^_^ I hope you update soon. |
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