| "Gypsy" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Title: great
Reviewed By: psycho_ssj [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great i love the story ...nice pan/vegeta i havnt read much of those love the plot thingy you got going on even tho i dont understand it O.0 but good job truely love the story
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Reviewed By: lulus blanket On: October 14, 2004 10:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv ur story i am a big vegeta/pan luver!Xcept theres not a lot out there. but ur story is awesome!
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Reviewed By: hellohellohellohowlow? On: May 30, 2004 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv ur fic i cant wait 4 the next chap.!!!!!!!!!!!:):) hurry!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: purplemonkey On: May 30, 2004 01:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a very good story its the kind that get u hooked so keep it up!:)
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Reviewed By: Piggypink On: July 17, 2003 08:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic!!
it's very original,
I hope you update soon,
so I can read it when I come back
from my vacation.
good luck,
Erica
PS: who are they |
Reviewed By: serpent On: June 15, 2003 22:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
please write more |
Reviewed By: serpent On: June 15, 2003 21:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
please write more |
Reviewed By: Satan's Widdle Hellper On: June 10, 2003 10:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
More! I demand more! Mwa! |
Reviewed By: Shelly On: June 05, 2003 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um...I think that this fic is REALLY good, and that you should keep it up. The Vegeta/Pan thing in the last chapter was interesting. I really love this story. Can't wait till the next chapter comes out. ^^
-Shelly |
Reviewed By: v son sayian On: May 10, 2003 20:36 CDT
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interesting , amusing interesting story wonder what it's leading up to. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 19:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay you, quit teasing us and update already!!! Heh heh. I love this story, and I will start harassing you regularly until there's a new chapter. :) Unless of course you tell me to leave you the hell alone. Hmm, I probably won't listen though. I'm stubborn like that.
As for the Pan/Veggie thing, I say so what. Saiyajin don't age like humans, so he still looks 25! Go for it Panny! |
Reviewed By: lizzy On: April 08, 2003 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay now, the first 2 chappies are great. but the P/V is freakin' me out. Vegeta is like 40 years older than Pan for gods' sake! *sigh* |
Reviewed By: Random Person On: April 06, 2003 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm usually a harsh critic, but I really enjoyed your fanfic! I especially love the Pan/Vegeta romance, even though it was cut short in the last chapter. There aren't that many post-apocalyptic fanfics out there, but this is one of the best. I hope you continue to write this regardless of reviewers, because I'm sure the other non-reviewing readers of this fanfic are coming back for more. I would like to make the recommendation of making the plot involving outside characters a little more entertaining, not that it isn't already. Other than that, I can't think of any more suggestions, because this fic is a very good read!
Thanks for the chapters so far, I hope to see more!! |
Reviewed By: Moonbaby On: March 20, 2003 23:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying this fic. I am not good at reviewing, but please conitue the good work! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 23:27 CST
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Well, I can't help you with the sexual favor thing, but I will leave a review! ^_^
Holy guacamole! I love this! That must have been almost ovewhelming for Pan to actually find a surviving piece of her ancestor's homeland! Too awesome.
I like Vegeta and Pan's post-spar bonding. I could just see that.
What is up with these demon things? They've made it to Earth?
You have to update soon! I'm hooked! |
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