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 Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 22, 2006 05:14 CST
Comment/Review:
I adored this story, the love the characters had for each other really pouring through. It was hot, sexy, sweet, and tender. You are a really talented writer and I hope you continue with your fics!
 Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 11, 2006 10:34 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a awesome story. You did a really great job writing this. It's definately one for the archives. I was really impressed with the mind set you had for each of the characters and description of the dances were amazing. I also feel you have a well thoughout conclusion for the truama and over coming his fear.
 Reviewed By: princess_forever [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 03, 2004 16:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like how you write this story...I can't wait to read more of your stuff and review them on how you did.like I said you are a really good writer.
 Reviewed By: yamiyugi2003 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 18, 2003 09:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
i liked this story. i would give you credit. it had what i liked in pairings. i hope you do a sequal.
 Reviewed By: Phoenix  On: April 10, 2003 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
The words needed to truely describe this story.......Have yet to be created by Man!!

What more can I say but ......WOW!!

This is a Fantastic Story!! So Heart warming,
so loving, so.......YAOI!!!

AnyHoo, as much as I hate to see this fic end, I am glad it was a happy ending!!

Thank You for sharing this wounderful story with us!!
 Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl  On: April 02, 2003 00:49 CST
Comment/Review:
You are such an awesome writer. This was a great fic just like your others. ^_^ Arigato for writing it! 1x2 & 3x4 Forever! ^-^ Oyasumi Nasai!
 Reviewed By: Kika  On: April 01, 2003 13:45 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Sweet zobie Jesus on a pogo stick! That was a great fic. I love it! Thanks for taking pity on us poor readers and giving us a sequel!
 Reviewed By: DBZVegeta [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 31, 2003 22:42 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WOW, I don't know what to say, but that was a wonderful story, so full of life and passion. So true to life and yet allowed the characters to shine though without being too OOC.

Wonderful story, keep writing and I will keep reading.

~DBZ Vegeta
 Reviewed By: Lethanon [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 31, 2003 14:47 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*claps hands in delight* That was perrrrrfect! Arigatou Shenlong-San!!! that was so good...*runs off to uni with a head full of very dirty thoughts, as it should be!* lol
 Reviewed By: Goldy Gems  On: March 24, 2003 12:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Excellent job! I hope to see either another chapter or a following series fanfic.
 Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl  On: March 24, 2003 02:47 CST
Comment/Review:
YEAH! THAT ROCKED! YOU GO ANGELS!! ^_^ Duo&Heero are fire hot! YEAH! PLEASE HAVE MORE UP REALLY REALLY SOON! I CAN'T WAIT! ^___^ Arigato! Oyasumi Nasai!
1x2Always!
3x4Forever!
 Reviewed By: Phoenix  On: March 24, 2003 00:58 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*Dances around the room like a idiot*
That was AMAZING!!!!!

Oh....to think of the things I would have done to have been in that club during their dance!!!!
*sigh*
AnyHoo, As I said before, That was AMAZING, BEAUTIFUL, SENSUAL, SEXY, TANTALIZING.....
and maybe a little bit naughty^_~!!

Please, Please, Please hurry with the next Chapter!!
 Reviewed By: Aria  On: March 23, 2003 14:49 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OH Absolutley fantastic! I am so happy that they got along so good together! I can't wait until you bring the epilogue along! It will be so much fun to read!!! I hope that you post that really really soon!!!!!!!!!
Love ya to death,
Aria
 Reviewed By: Ita-chan  On: March 23, 2003 10:24 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WWWWWoooaaahhhhhhhh MMMaaaaannnn,...that is SSSoooooooooooooo,...Daaaaaaamnnnnn,...HHHHoooottttttttttt,....*drools*...great job on this latest chapter,...*grins*...Looooveeee it,...keep-up the good work kay,..and continue soon with the Epilogue Neee,....till then,...Jaaaaaaaaaaaaaa and GGGaaaaaanbbbbbbbaaaaateeee-Neeeee!!^.~!!
 Reviewed By: Ita-chan  On: March 18, 2003 20:41 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WWWWWWoooooooHHHHHHHoooooooo,...the heat is OOOOOOnnnnnnnn,....YYYeeeeaaahhhh,.....^O^
FFiiinaallyyyyyy heero gona get HHoootttttt and DDiirtyyyyy with duo on the stage,....*drools*...and if heero looks as SSSeeexxyyyyyy as trowa and quatra said he will by wearing TThaaaatttt outfit,...then the crowds will go WWWWWiilllddddddd me thinks,...LLLooooookkkkouttttttt MMMMiinnaaaaaa-sssaaannn,...Shiiniggaaaamiiiiii and his SSSeeexxxxyyyyyyyy PPuuurrrrfeeecttttttttt Soldddierrrrrr is gona RRRRooooocccckkkkzzzzzz YYYoouurrrrrr WWWWooorrllddddddddd,........Yeaaahhhhhh,...*giggles*...keep-up the good work kay,...and continue soon,...till then,...JJaaaaaaaaaaaa and GGGGaaannbbaaaatttttteeeee-Neeeeee!!^O^!!
 Reviewed By: Goldy Gems  On: March 18, 2003 17:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Alright! A duet! I can't wait to read about this. Finish the fic!
 Reviewed By: Aria  On: March 18, 2003 16:53 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh god please update soon i cannot wait to see what happens! It will be terrific!!! I hope that you update really really really soon cause I am going to die with anticipation here!!!! Please
another chapter soon!!!!
Love ya,
Aria
 Reviewed By: Phoenix  On: March 15, 2003 15:11 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is an absolutely Amazing Story!! Heero and Duo are perfect together!! Please Hurry with the next Chapter!!
 Reviewed By: Aria  On: March 15, 2003 08:19 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Love what you did with this chapter! I bet Heero is going to talkto Tro about him dancing on stage with Duo to get his spark back! That is going to be sooo Kawai!!!!! I cannot wait until you get your next chapter up! Write again soon!
Love ya,
Aria
 Reviewed By: Ita-chan  On: March 15, 2003 06:38 CST
Comment/Review:
WWoooHHooooo,....heero is up to somethin
it seems,...*giggles*...and i bet it's gona be somethin that would "turn-on" the heat back for Shinigami HHmmmm??...*hentai leers*....keep-up the good work shenlong-sama,...and keep-the HHoootttt lemons "coming"..*giggles*...till next chapter,...Jaaaaaaaaaaaaa and GGaaannnbbbaaatteeeeeee-Neeeeeeee!!^.~!!
 Reviewed By: Aria  On: March 11, 2003 15:46 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG you have set this up so perfectly so Heero can dance with Duo and I hope that you do, because
it will be really cool to see him dancing with Duo. I cannot wait until you update again!!!
Love ya,
Aria
 Reviewed By: cherrycheesehead [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 11, 2003 15:04 CST
Comment/Review:
Together as a duet, twice the sexyness.
James
 Reviewed By: Goldy Gems  On: March 11, 2003 09:50 CST
Comment/Review:
I can't wait to see what Heero has in mind ;).
Finish the fic soon!
 Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 11, 2003 09:42 CST
Comment/Review:
hahahahaa, the only way to make Duo feel save will be if Heero chooses to dance with him as well. giggle, I bet Heero knows that, too.

I guess we will have them both dancing on the stage soon, won't we?
 Reviewed By: Arithkenshin [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 11, 2003 05:52 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I could have sworn I reviewed this already, but apparently not ... oops
Loved the first story and love this one just as much. It's another one of those stories that I keep hanging for the next chapter on.
Very well written and the idea is excellent.

Keep up the great work

~Arith
 Reviewed By: IcaBob  On: March 09, 2003 16:20 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
CONTINUE! You must. I am still loving is by the way. So yeah.
Love & Peace ^_~
 Reviewed By: cherrycheesehead [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 08, 2003 01:47 CST
Comment/Review:
This is greatness, all sweet and with some angsty like stuff.
James
 Reviewed By: Aria  On: March 07, 2003 21:02 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm so happy you updated again, poor Duo he is so vunerable, you need to make sure that Heero keeps him safe! Or else.........Anyway I love the fic totally and I cann't wait to read more! I hope you update soon. Ja ne!
Love ya,
Aria
 Reviewed By: Aria  On: March 04, 2003 16:15 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OOOOOHHHHH! That sounds like the perfect setup for Heero to dance on stage with Duo! He could be out there and protect him! That would be so sweet! I hope that the officers aren' too harsh with Duo! That wouldn't be good...
Love ya,
Aria


P.S. Write more really soon I can't wait!
 Reviewed By: Lita  On: March 04, 2003 16:08 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*jumps up and down* This is so good! Continue soon plez! Can't wait!
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