| "Bittersweet reunion" Reviews/Comments [ 70 ] |
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Reviewed By: trunksvegetafrodo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 04:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: LostMetallica [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 15:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. Glad to see there are some people still out there that can treat death with the respect that it deserves. Unlike some of these people that post on this site! I just can't believe you don't have more visits to this... my story isn't anywhere close to this good and more people went to it. I don't get it.
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Reviewed By: Kichi On: July 27, 2003 03:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was short and sad but it was something i never read b4 so i gave it a higher ratng. original stuff is better no matter how short, whic is really my only complaint. but i'm not really complaining anyway, it was a long as it needed to be to get the point across. |
Reviewed By: Sinu-Yasha On: July 25, 2003 00:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was beautiful. seriously. you have a good heart, i hope to see more of your work in the future. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 10, 2003 03:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dammit that was beautiful! You have a way of telling a story that makes the reader feel like they're there. What a sad reunion and it made me cry. I read this a few months ago but I couldn't review then. I'm glad I finally got the chance to do so. Great job Barb! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: cyzay [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 14:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my fucking god. that was beutiful. so much emotion packed into something so short. that's tallent. vegit's one word to bulma, "woman" thats just... powerful. each of the three i can see reaction just as you wote. it was beutiful. you have no reason to be embarrased bout anything. for your first fic, this is increadible. i wish i had your writing tallent. i hope you will share more fics with us. |
Reviewed By: Nameless On: April 01, 2003 11:52 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! this is good. its really sad too... Nice job. |
Reviewed By: icenectar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 11:51 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, you've got great potential here. Keep it up! It's very well written. Good portrayal of the characters, too. |
Reviewed By: Jamz On: April 01, 2003 11:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maaaaaan, very emotional stuff there. I love the story and would comment more if I could see the KB through all these damn tears! Keep it up, hope to see more like this :) |
Reviewed By: JimBobPeteMoss On: March 03, 2003 10:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Horriblly dark and depressing... I loved it. |
Reviewed By: Pareathe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 13:09 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm finally starting to catch up on some reading...about damned time, I know. Man, I'm ashamed it took me so long to read this. It's absolutely beautiful though...got me a bit misty once or twice, truth be told. The characterization was great (which, from me, is saying something, cause I'm ashamed to admit I'm mega-anal about stuff like that), the descriptions and visualations were beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time... *sighs* It has a bit of it all. I still refuse to believe you hadn't written anything before this. I mean...you should see MY first fanfic attempt. It was ATROCIOUS!
This, on the other hand, was wonderful. So, do me a favor, k? Take off that ridiculous "Don't laugh at me thing" at the top, 'cause you don't need it. Exchange it for a Kleenex warning, and keep up the excellent work. ^_~
Pareathe |
Reviewed By: Lance On: February 26, 2003 11:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! Its deep with so much emotion written in it. I could feel the pain of Goky, Vegeta and 18. I hope you keep with writting. You got far too much talent to waste. |
Reviewed By: dbzobsessed On: February 22, 2003 21:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I, like the others who have reviewed this, am sitting here with tears running down my face as I review. That was so well written...and so sad. I never saw it coming, and WHAM! it hits you... hard. It was short, to the point, and so emotional. It is truly a great fic! |
Reviewed By: Jzara On: February 19, 2003 20:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! nooooooooooo You made me cry!!!!! Now my hubby is laughing at me! This was so awesome... Imma see if I can force him to read...I bet he cry too. I'm so overwhelmed by the beautiful way you wrote that....darn...still crying.... |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 18:42 EST
Comment/Review:
It cut off the second half of my review!! Arrrrgh!!
AS I WAS SAYING!! This fic is touching and heart breaking. Vegeta's actions at Bulma's grave just about ripped my heart out! Just that one word, "Woman" conveyed so much more emotion than any long soliloquy could have.
You have awakened a great talent in yourself, Bardockgurl. I look forward to reading everything you have yet to write!! ^.^ |
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