| "When I have lost my temper" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Relix On: January 28, 2004 17:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How long until epilogue?
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Reviewed By: Hellkeeper On: November 15, 2003 17:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that was the best thing i have every read in my whole life. it was soo so, i can't even find words to describe it omg
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Reviewed By: Little John of Locksland On: November 06, 2003 17:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've probably heard it a hundred times but your grammar and spelling skills leave a lot of room for improvement. You also really need to read your own work before posting it since some of the mistakes are not explained away by bad skills in the English language. Use of the word 'of' when 'off' is needed being one such example. You also get into trouble at times regarding tense issues. You used 'loss' instead of the correst 'lose' at one point for instance. The story itself was alright but problems with sentence structure, misused words, and spelling problems caused the enjoyment of it to plummet. If you can fix that one area of your writing which is in dire straits then this story would be practically perfect.
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Reviewed By: moonbay On: July 10, 2003 01:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
i hate you, the story was excellent untill sesshy died. I hate you. Sesshy cant die. |
Reviewed By: amanda On: June 10, 2003 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU HAVE TO WRITE THE ENDING PLEASE!!!!! it is going to drive me crazy@ if you dont
~~Me~~ |
Reviewed By: Sorrow On: June 07, 2003 01:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ahh you have to hurry and write more snff poor sess sniff but oh well time to write more eh |
Reviewed By: Kilala36 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 09:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was good! Please continue NOW Or FEEL MY WRATH. I give you a 400/400 |
Reviewed By: allitsuchi On: April 03, 2003 18:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hury up and put the next chapter up
or die |
Reviewed By: Kiki On: March 12, 2003 08:47 CST
Comment/Review:
I like it. Good story. Please continue. |
Reviewed By: Zerianyu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 20:37 CST
Comment/Review:
I like the story but I can't read it all ause it is cut off on the right side of the page could you mabey e-mail the first xhapter to me or fix that or something I want to finish the story my e-mail is zerianyu@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: nekokami On: February 22, 2003 17:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
MY RATING MY CHANGE IF YA TELL ME SANGO REACTION TO THE 'HAPPY EVENT' I HATE CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!! ...hehe she REALLY is gonna kill him when she learns that Kagome is, well...expecting. ^__^;
CLEAN UP YOUR SPELLING
it would help make the fic more readable(but dont worry your fic IS good, it just could be better,also. |
Reviewed By: Miyuki On: February 21, 2003 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOSHINBOKU!!!! not god tree... the english translations don't sound good. The lemon scenes aren't described enough.... well they are but they are kinda short. and Houshi-sama. it's not Housi. |
Reviewed By: Minako Murasaki On: February 19, 2003 10:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great I think you should keep writing! Can't wait to read the next one! |
Reviewed By: Mr_Vampire On: February 19, 2003 10:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a very good story. please update soon. |
Reviewed By: DBZVegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 20:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like, I like. Please continue your story. |
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