Reviewed By: troutman [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 07:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its interesting,I like. It moves along swiftly. I usually see new charactors and stop reading but this grabbed my attention right away. As far as for going hental, truthfully that what gets my attention when I'm looking at descriptons. If you go lemon, please don't give us a paragraph every 20 chapters, just make it as good as the rest of the story and thats all anyone can ask for, |
