| "Mai's Secret" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Bluejay2099 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 23:17 CST
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**WARNING** Spoilers from the fic Not a bad story overall, but, in my personal opinion, the ending sucked a ton of hippo dick. I mean geez, after all that, you lay Tea out as a tramp? come on! There's sucha a thing as a surprise, but that was just to much. If there's one thing I can't stand, it's Anzu (Tea) bashing. And here we thought she was a victim. And one more thing, don't write about topics that you don't understand. (No offence but...) YOur sorry exuse for a Lemon proved that you know nothing about sex. Do yourself a favor and educate yourself by reading "All's fair in love and dueling, chapter 3" now that is a good Yugi/Anzu Lemon. Despite what may seem like a harsh review, I actually did like your fic fo the most part, but I just can't see Anzu as a slut, nor can I see her taking such drastic measures to escape her regreats.
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Title: Love the chapter
Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 19:02 CST
Comment/Review:
*crying* Well... *sniffle* That was *sniffle* a great *sniffle* story. *crying* Starflame dragon: I'm her muse. That ws a great story with a amazing twist! Adios!
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Reviewed By: Falling out of love [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic was good, it made me almost cry at the unexpected ending when Taya had killed herself, and wrote the suicide note. It was good, but very sad!:( |
Reviewed By: Zidane12348 On: April 02, 2003 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the saddest thing I have ever read that was very good. |
Reviewed By: Jc 2172 On: March 15, 2003 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow i'm shocked... tea... suicide... WOA! Cool fan fic. Well at least yami can be with tea in the shadow realm.
Now I got to go read a happy story.
lay(later) |
Reviewed By: Hikari Angel 12 On: March 11, 2003 19:13 CST
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Aww! cute! |
Reviewed By: lola4eva On: February 22, 2003 04:25 CST
Comment/Review:
okay, now i hate the story. you ruined it completley. thanx al lot! |
Reviewed By: lola4eva On: February 22, 2003 04:19 CST
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wait one gosh darn minute, yugi had a condom under his bed? Ohhhhhh! Someone's prepared. |
Reviewed By: ruby queen of evil [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you i love your stuff, more hon |
Reviewed By: Merlin On: February 18, 2003 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, wow....
more... more...
oh, please... more... |
