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Reviewed By: Serenestorm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 14:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this story dozens of times and I still love it. I wish you would continue to right more on the BOAP universe. I've never liked original characters before but I love Sage. He just fits in so right with DBZ. Please write more!! You can take this concept so much farther.
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Reviewed By: Purple Mist On: June 20, 2003 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haven't read 3 yet, so this'll be a treat for me. I hope Gohan stays with Sage. I don't like Vadel/Vedal-whatever!- very much. Too much like Chichi, but not insane! Bulma rocks, thank you for making her so! |
Reviewed By: Cat On: April 06, 2003 12:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This was very interesting and dramatic. You aren't gonna leave it there, are you?? Please say you're not! This is too exciting to leave it there! I demand another chapter!! *cough* Please?? |
Reviewed By: Myself On: March 02, 2003 13:44 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, I never really did like Videl.
Also, Gohon and Sage are so kawaii together.
But...I LOVE SAGE! |
Reviewed By: Dark Serapha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 03:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Another great Sage-Story! So that's how Gohan claimed him! Waaah! Stupid Gohan! Evil Videl! Poor Sage.. *sniff* *grins
Well, it was obvious that Gohan would do that (at least to someone who red other Sage-Stories beforehand - hehehe)
I really liked this story, because I love the BOAP-Universe very much, maybe most of them all. I only would have wished for a small description of Vegeta's and Goku's own activities on the moon-night.. *grins* You know me, total sucker for them...
Anyway, you'll get my total standard-reaction to your stories:
SPORK! MORE! SPORK! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 00:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another wonderful ep this one is very good. keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Whiteblayze2002 On: March 06, 2003 16:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wasn't sure if 1 or 10 was best but I meant it for 10 as the best. It was a great story and I hope you continue this. I wouldn't survive if you didn't finish the whole tale. |
Reviewed By: Princess Emeraude On: February 25, 2003 21:02 CST
Comment/Review:
Many thanks on posting the second chap here. Please with tiny gummy sages on top, update soon?
*looks around for neko Sage* *touches head* He's sleeping in my hair again..hee. *tiny neko purrs*
Would also luv to see Sage eat his first McDonald's french fry..is always a good thing. *gets misty eyed*
Many thanks again for a cool story! |
Reviewed By: Talon Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 20:06 CST
Comment/Review:
*coughs*
Er...for more Sage saga's, please pester my twin, Cleodasia...Sage has prominant roles in both her Reflections Universe and also Black Dragon. (Not to mention her original universe...*DROOL*)PLEASE spork her...also she owes me and nightcat the second part of "Zoo"!!!!!! She's here on Media Miner...*points*
As far as my spelling and grammar...that is the SOLE work of my beloved beta-reader and danglemate, bakayaro onna who has done several illustrations for my fics...including this one!!!
*cue applause*
I'm glad everyone's enjoying this!!!
Thank you so much for your reviews!! |
Reviewed By: likeacat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cannot believe I've become addicted to an original character. Add to that - the grammar and spelling is always correct. (I haven't found one of my pet peeves yet - lose and loose!)
Would you consider cloning yourself and your twin so you can write even more Sage sagas? Please? |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 21:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is truly a wonderfull fic. Videll kind of reminds me of chichi in this one. keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 19:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Read it before @ your site... Read it again here... consumed it, loved it! So much care and love. Your shota is truly unique & thoroughly enrapturing. |
Reviewed By: Naturi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 10:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I first read this entire story on your website, and I AM SOOOOOOO GLAD you moved it here. I LOVE the pairings in this one, although it was a tad weird for a 29(did I get the age right) year old Gohan banging his 13 year old bond bro...weird but hey, I thrive on weird, and dammit I love it!!! Videl's just gonna haveta suck it up...no mere human wench is enough for Saiyajin royalty!! Update soon!!!! |
Reviewed By: Talon Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 20:09 CST
Comment/Review:
*note*
To discover how the bonding of Vegeta and Goku came about, please refer to Birth of a Prince.
*grins*
*bows*
Thank you all...and the muses thank you too!!
Mujiku-muse: *flips up his skirt*
Sage-muse: *grumbles something rude* |
Reviewed By: utsukushi On: February 18, 2003 20:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that this is the most original fic that I have read. I love how you explained the bonding between Vegeta and Goku, but now I want to read about how that happened. I think that this is one of the most thought out fics ever. You think of just about everything. Keep up the great work and I hope to read much more from you very soon. |
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