| "Happy Anti-Valentines Day" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 10:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 2 it was great. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 10:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 1 it was great.
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Reviewed By: Steve M. On: June 01, 2004 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is really original and interesting. You go into good depth of explaining how she becomes this way. Nice Work
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Reviewed By: dbzroks On: May 17, 2004 10:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow that was weird pan was kinda goth
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Reviewed By: wynter On: June 03, 2003 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's every emotional and that's what i like in ficts. did a great job inwriting it*_* |
Reviewed By: Gogito-DBZ1 On: April 15, 2003 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic. It was interesting how Bulma and Bra were totally freaked out by the scene Pan and Trunks were making, but Vegeta was not the least bit fazed. It was interesting twist when it came to the flashbacks. Cell coming back for revenge on Gohan and taking it out on Videl was a good way to explain Pan's behavior. It was also interesting how Pan got Trunks' Saiyajin side to take over. I would really like to read the sequel if you ever make one. ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Gogito-DBZ1 On: April 15, 2003 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic. It was interesting how Bulma and Bra were totally freaked out by the scene Pan and Trunks were making, but Vegeta was not the least bit fazed. It was interesting twist when it came to the flashbacks. Cell coming back for revenge on Gohan and taking it out on Videl was a good way to explain Pan's behavior. It was also interesting how Pan got Trunks' Saiyajin side to take over. I would really like to read the sequel if you ever make one. ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Gogito-DBZ1 On: April 15, 2003 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic. It was interesting how Bulma and Bra were totally freaked out by the scene Pan and Trunks were making, but Vegeta was not the least bit fazed. It was interesting twist when it came to the flashbacks. Cell coming back for revenge on Gohan and taking it out on Videl was a good way to explain Pan's behavior. It was also interesting how Pan got Trunks' Saiyajin side to take over. I would really like to read the sequel if you ever make one. ^-^ |
Reviewed By: gohans_girl_ashia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 13:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great storry......plz write more! |
Reviewed By: supahsa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 11:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...ehh...i like your fic. please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Chick On: February 19, 2003 14:16 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm so loving this story!! It's a little dark but the way you wrote it made it interesting!! can't wait to see what trunks is going to do!! please update soon!! |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 08:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, Pan seems to have a bit of a dark side in this story! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 19:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, ok just wow that was very good and I like it very muc. Keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: kureeji [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 19:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey,
Hehehe. Thanks for reviewing my story. I didnt know that I had stolen that quote from Mulan. Do you think I should change it? I dont want to make people think Im an evil line stealer.
I do understand the resoning behind why you ahve written Pan so depressed. I do not doubt your abilities, heehee. Youre great. I want to hear more about the pain she has went through, and I know that you will explain it well, probably in the next chapters. I was probably too jumpy in my review, Im sorry it was a bit unfair.
Well, im working on loading chapter 2 to mediaminer but Im new here and it is confusing me -.- It is a tad bit different from fanfiction net. I dont know how to add a chapter, it keeps replacing the first one...heh. Enough rambling. Thank you for your nice comments about my story and sorry for spamming yer fic with my reviews XD.
Bai! |
Reviewed By: kureeji [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 18:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, you have an quirky little writing style, lots of witty and sarcastic jokes that I enjoyed. I do however, think you might be laying it on a little thick with Pan. Pan is so very depressed and cynical. SHe's worse than a jaded little goth girl. Im not saying your story is bad or anything, please dont get me wrong, I just think Pan is a bit OOC. |
