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"Gunning Down Romance" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]
 Reviewed By: Mastero  On: February 19, 2003 12:46 CST
Comment/Review:
It has an origional twist. It wasn't nessasarly romance sence it was only friendship. Could have been alittle longer.

One mistake though. You had Tai say "I'm Tai Kamiya, Kari's sister." He should have said Kari's brother. Or that Kari is my sister.

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