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| "Carpe Diem" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: abydos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn! i also have a soft spot for this relationship, though i prefer Seishirou.. i think. this was very good, i can't wait for you to post the ending to "even in death". you best believe i will remind you! :) best wishes
| Reviewed By: maladyrancor [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've decided to review everything that I have read from you because I think it's so good. ^_^ First off, I think you deserve all 10 out of 10s! I don't know what the other reviewers are thinking.
You have a great way of capturing the angst and emotion in an incredibly genuine way. The effect is an haunting story like this!
Please keep writing! I hope that you continue with all your amazing X/1999 stories | Reviewed By: Tortie-chu On: June 09, 2003 02:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, yeah, these guys ARE wildly OOC in my opinion... so, does that matter to you? I don't like it but you should write what you want to. It's a good lemon, just not for those two. =P | Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: April 07, 2003 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WWWWWoooaahhhhh,...i TTooottaallyyyy LLLoovveeeeee this pairing,....unfortunately,...there seems not enough fanfics around that got these pair bein couple-up together,..*sssssiiggghhh*....*pout*...and i'm glad to read this fic of yours,...Soooooooooooooo SSwwweeeeettttt and Saaaaaappyyy,...with enough touch of angstyness mix-in with the romance between these two,...KamuixSubaru/SubaruxKamui is MMMuuucchhhhhhh BBBeeetttteeerrrr than SxS or FxK,...i've read some SxS fics,..even though some of them did appeal to me,..i still much prefer KxS than SxS or FxS,...ya did a good job writing this fic,...it's Reeeaaalllyy Goooooodddd,...but the lemon scenes between them seems abit short for my taste,...it's good but still left me feel like it could be much more longer and detail,....all in all,..hope ya gona continue writing more KxS/SxK fics,...keep-up the good work,..and have a good day,...till next time,..Jaaaaaaaaaaa and GGGaaannbbbaatttteeeee-Neeee!!^.~!! | Reviewed By: CrimsonYoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!! ^_^ That was very good. I luve it!!!! wOOt! A subaru and kamui thing... *drool* | Reviewed By: jaya On: March 18, 2003 23:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am anti SubaruxKamui (pro SeishirouxSubaru), but some times I read this pairing though cause I might find a little jewel like this. In fact I believe what made this fic good was it was more of a KamuixSubaru fic than SubaruxKamui, and even when Subaru topped Kamui was an aggressive uke. Basically what I'm saying is Subaru was truly in character, and this is the first time I have seen it with this pairing. And it astonished me.
While you need a little lemon work (don't we all), and there is room for improvement in your style, you have characterized the characters true to their nature, which in my opinion is the most important part of good fanficion. Please continue writing such wonderful works.
This is one of the longest reviews I have given for a fic so consider your self praised. ^_^
Jaya |
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