| "Alternate Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Azera_Vader [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 17:50 CST
Comment/Review:
You can't stop there! Come on!!!!
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Reviewed By: Emeraldgrl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you should finish this. It's a great story, and a lot of people enjoy it. Please, please, please finish or update soon!
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Reviewed By: Lesiaf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2003 12:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
You should really finish this it's great! |
Reviewed By: Eo On: June 14, 2002 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good i love it and i can't wait to read more so up date soon. I'll be checking for up dates. Eo |
Reviewed By: nemesis [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2002 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god! that was so good!!!!!! i cant wait for you to write more!!! can you please write more? i seriously cant stand this tencion!! especially since its a cliffy!!! if you have atlist a little goodness in you please write more as soon as possible!!!! i cant wait!!! im serious ill post a review, no matter how small, every day untill you post another chapter!!! you hear me!!! ill bug you like there is no tomorrow!!! and that is one of my greatest achivements! its like my lifes work to bug everyone! so like back to the point would you PLEASE write more on the story i cant wait for another chapter!! and i tell you out of all the stories i read on this site, and i read a lot, i have reviewed only 2 stories yours being one of them, so you can understand that i dont review often! once again PLEASE write more soon
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Reviewed By: Adyen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2001 23:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, you used a few over-used ideas, truthfully, so I can't really say much about that. Just the first page was so filled with pointless banter I could literally guess what and how it was going to happen.
BUT, it wasn't all bad. The Lunar Generals, while also an overused idea (adding new Guardians/Generals), is intresting, and you added a twist by making the second missing, so there are many different future chances to make things intresting.
Maybe I should review it later, after you finished the fic, cause though the beginning part isn't as intresting, the middle and end is starting to pick up. |
Reviewed By: nicole On: November 28, 2001 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story. The style was great, it just jumped slightly in places. I never had a problem with the spelling or grammer. As for the rest of it, it is one of my favorites now. I would love it if you would allow me to post this on my site; Moonlight Roses flowers of the heart. My email is amethystrose20@yahoo.com or sailorpluto23 or moonlightroses19 both at hotmail, and the site is located at www.geocities.com/sailorpluto23/MoonLightRoses.html |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: November 11, 2001 09:05 CST
Comment/Review:
what hapend to rini |
