| "Love Lyrics" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: fyrechylde (not loggered in) On: March 23, 2005 03:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nicely done. You kept them fairly in character especially Vegita. A few spelling/grammatical errors, but everyone makes mistakes. The whole bit with them sitting on the roof staring at the stars was beautiful. I thoroughly enjoyed this and look forward to reading more things by you.
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Reviewed By: Takahashi On: May 16, 2004 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! Brilliant writing ^_~
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Reviewed By: Kandy On: February 19, 2003 09:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I kinda liked it. I thought that since this was your first lemon it would kind of...
suck
But you proved me wrong. It was tasteful and well written and I commend you on that. I don't like to judge before reading, but a lot of first time lemon writers get it all wrong and tasteless. Alot of body fluids mentioned and :
He stuck his big fat cock in her dripping wet pussy
But your was really good. I hope you come out with other B/V fanfics in the future, because you have talent. |
Reviewed By: Kat On: February 19, 2003 09:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Very sweet. I like your story. You didn't make Vegeta overly mushy. |
Reviewed By: kureeji [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 07:01 CST
Comment/Review:
lol...Vegeta is such an ass. I am liking this alot, its too bad I have to get on the bus >. |
