| "Only to be Distracted" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 20:05 CDT
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Ancient pot monster? What fun! I adore a rediculously creative villain. Loved the cursing Shippo - that was different. This was a great story; mature and outrageously fun to read. The wish was great & very original, but the house was the cherry on the banana split. I must now read everything else you've written. I've been trying to read the works of everyone who have been kind enough to review my schlock. It's taken me a while to get to this. Looks like it's gonna be a long night!
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Title: Yummy Candy...
Reviewed By: Alterfano [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 16:07 CDT
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Hey - I know you think I don't read ANYTHING, but this was short and very delectable. Nice background on "Dogs" and very inventive. I enjoyed it thoroughly on my planeride!
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Reviewed By: Catalina27 On: June 07, 2005 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great fanfic. You are a great writer. Very detailed and clear. I think your characters are very close to the "real thing." I did think the whole house in a rock thing was a little out there, expecially in regards to the fire rat clothing. But you made the whole idea plasuable. I throughly enjoyed it. It is rare to find a author on here that is as gifted in writting as you.
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Title: Super kawaii!
Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 06:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute fic! My fav part was your decision for Inu's wish on the jewel. I've never seen another rendition of that, which makes me sad because that's an awesome choice. That way he can always be happy, and never has to give up any part of himself! I giggled like a school girl when I read your fic... and that's big coming from a hardend Bi@*h like me. keep up the awesome work!
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Reviewed By: Youkai Megami On: February 19, 2003 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fabuous job! I never really considered that as a possible turn out. The battle scenes were especially riveting! :D But-really how does it turn out with the Taijiya and the Houshi? And other than that, keep it up! ENCORE!! |
Reviewed By: Bri-Chan On: February 19, 2003 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
You killed Kikyou! I LOVE YOU!!!! ^o^ P.S. Yessum, Sango/Miroku fanfic sounds good. Huhuhuhuhuhu....Dead Kikyou. |
Reviewed By: coherentidiot On: February 19, 2003 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My gushness...I loved this fic. The only complaint I have is that after Sango yelled at Miroku, that issue remained a little unresolved. Are you planning to write an M/S fic? I hope so! *drools in anticipation*...anyway, I really liked that idea about the stone being the pathway to Inuyasha's home. It sounds like it could very well be true, since his father's tomb came out of his eye. *applause* Please write more! |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 17:04 CST
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OMG!!! =D This fic was great!!!
The only thing that I found somewhat wrong with it is that I wouldn't really call this fiction NC-17...there is no actual written lemon. If anything this would be placed in the "R" section for some certain adult situations and cursing, but beyond that is pointless.
Maybe you could write a separate little story to this one...you know, when they actually mated for the first time or something? You never got into full detail or anything with that...
Besides that, this is a great story! I loved it!!! =D
~*Rizu-chan*~ |
