| "The Hidden" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: I'msosorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2003 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great idea for a fanfic.. Chi.. I'm sorry!! I didn't mean it!!*waaah!*Thats all I'm going to say..*sniff* I'm started reading your fics, its so hard to sort all those messages at asaiyanslove!! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: March 22, 2003 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! I especially liked the relationship between Goku and Gohan...at the end when Gohan says he doesn't want to fight anymore and Goku accepts it. It's very sweet. |
Reviewed By: Jzara Sheer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 06:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Thanks Tristar! Thanks C for R & R'ing thanks Bardockgurl :) I'm glad you followed it through! I know some ppl may be turned off by the format or even the rating but its DBZ at its truest which is what I was going for :)
And I just love lil Gohan! I was really going through a lil Gohan phase at this time. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 14:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was good, I loved it lol and yes I agree with Carla they were protraided right. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 18:18 CST
Comment/Review:
It's funny...the words you write...I can just imagine them coming out of the character's mouths. You have a great handle on all the personalities. It's a very good story. |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 14:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Poor Gohan!!! What's going to happen to him??? You need to let us know!!! :O |
