| "My One and Only" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
Title: My One And Only
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 20:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: yumemiru/amanda On: March 30, 2005 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice fic. ^.~ I didn't mind the whole "master" thing, dont worry ^^ lol
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Title: My One And Only
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 16:58 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: My One And Only
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 18:38 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Nazuma Neiko On: September 01, 2003 05:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
O.K. befor I get on with my complements and
bitching about this fic I didn`t want you getting the wronging idea.I love this fic! I`m a serious Fluffy/Kagome fanfics. as i am with yami/yugi
(yu*gi*ho)Kenchin/Sano (Rurouni Kenchin)and last but not my least favorite by far(favorite couple
in fanfiction)Kurama/Hiei from Yu Yu Hakusho!!
Now my bitching not,I reapeat,NOT FLAMES OR TOMATOES!! WHAT ABOUT SHIPPO!!!? WHAT HAPPES TO
Sango and Mr. Pervert(Mirouku)HA HA!! I HAVE MORE BUT I`ll HUMOR YOU FROM A DISTANCE. Oh Yay before I forget my advice on your half crappy lemon!!
SEEK PROFESTIONAL HELP WITH LEMONS!! SEEK THE ADVICE OF SANDY YOUKO!! SHE`s THE BEST LEMONST!
I`LL REVIEW AGAIN WHEN I FIND HER FANFICTION PAGE
AND YOU CAN E-MAIL HER!!!!!!!!!! O.K. K.O.T!!
(Keep*On*Trying) |
Reviewed By: angel On: July 05, 2003 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like the story till you have the part where Sessie have 14 other women to share with. |
Reviewed By: milla_ miko On: May 10, 2003 08:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was really enjoying your story until u decided 2 SHARE Sessie-chan w/ 14 other women. I was willing to accept Rin (barely though) but all the other Vixen. NO sorry I CAN'T. you are really talented, but I am a SERIOUS kagome/Sessie fan, not saying ur not but I need them to be w/ each other in the end and only each other or not at all. I an very protective of them. I just wanted to let u know I am not going to read the rest of the story cuz the whole sharing thing....SORRY....I 'm really picky about my S/K. But you are a really good writer I just CAN'T finish. |
Reviewed By: ennovymoon On: March 04, 2003 19:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I completely fell in love with Sesshoumaru in the fic.
THUD!!!~falls to floor in faint~
WHAT A MAN!!!
He is just soooo great!!! heee
~DEEP SIGH and dreamy eyes~
I...I love Sesshoumaru.
humph!! ~ loud stomp and pout!
I want to be one of Sesshou-sama's vixen's.
~begin temper tantram~
kicking against floor...
Why, why me!!
waaaaaaaaa waaaaaaaaa
Update quickly I MUST know what is to happen next.
Sniff...thanks |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 23:28 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SORRY I HAVE NOT REVIEWED SOONER I HAD A LOT OF
HOMEWORK THE LAST COUPLE DAYS!!!!!
THAT WAS PRETTY GOOD FOR A FIRST TIMER!!!!!!
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!1 |
Reviewed By: Ericedwyn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 00:24 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi ShellBabe,
It's like Sess is the lord of his pride. I think you should continue and write the story you want to write. Write for yourself first. I find your story original and I want to see how it will evolve. |
Reviewed By: Krazy Kat On: February 27, 2003 14:27 CST
Comment/Review:
That is so cute!!! I wouldn't mind being one of Sesho's Vixens at all!!! But alas for that is not possible!!! (grins!!) And don't worry I for one am not bothered by the whole one man fourteen girls thing...I mean he is a Demon...a lord too...so it is only natural that he has more than one woman...right??? 0_0 Besides it is so obvious that he loves them all!!! Sooooo I hope you continue!!!!! KAT *_* |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*thinking* Hm, where should I begin?
Guess I should get the nasties out of my system. *crosses arms* If anyone gives you any flack/flames then tell them this ... an author can write about rape/murder/abuse/etc without promoting/believing that it's write. And besides, it's an AU, so you can do whatever the hell you want.
And yeah, most of us ARE uncomfortable with the idea of Sesshoumaru having mutiple mates/kids. *shrugs* (the end of Chapter5 felt like a Sess/Rin fic) For me, though ... I guess my discomfort comes from the conflict with the story title at the moment.
It's like I hear Sess in my head saying, "Kagome, you're my one and only ... out of fifteen. So then, you're special, but special in the 'so is every other girl I've mated with' way. But don't feel bad 'cause I love you, respect you, and like Miroku I want you to bear my child ... but just put it out of your pretty head that I say this to ALL my beloved Vixen."
O.O You see what I mean? *shrugs* I know, my opinion doesn't matter much, but ... I couldn't help it. -_-
So I guess what I REALLY want to know is . . . just WHO (if ANYone) is Sesshoumaru's "one and only?"
Oh, and don't forget to include scenes with Shippou ever now and then.
I LOVED that Sango and Miroku hooked up!! (I was meaning to ask you where she was in the first chapters -_-) I think the whole Vixen idea is great--the powers rock! And lemon or no lemon (Sess/Kag are SO sexy!!! EsPECially doused in LEMON! ^_~ *falls over in shock*), I'm looking forward to many more wonderfully SHOCKING chapters. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: shiningwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 13:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please do more i'll give you a hug a chapter pleaase |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 20:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh!!! please continue the story!!!!!!
I can't wait till the next chappy!!!!
good luck!! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: -Onimusha- On: February 23, 2003 17:05 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dont give up just because of some flames. Keep going for the rest of us that are enjoying it ok. |
Reviewed By: Jam ( to family) Dilan( to friends) On: February 23, 2003 11:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God, Oh my God, Oh my God, Oh my God, Well I'll say this, making Inuyashs in to a bad guy is ok with me as long sa he's acting really bad, and is beging for mercy in the next chcapter (sight){that would be soooooooooooooooo cool!!} and I love a fic wheh Fluffy and Kagome are together. your fic rules!!!! |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLESE CONTINUE I LIKE THE WAY THE STORY IS GOING!!!
AND WHO WERE THEY CHASING?!?!? |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 11:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY!!!!!!!!!
I AM SUCH A FLUFFY FAN!!!!!!!!
I JUST LOVE THE WAY YOUR STORY IS COMING OUT!!!!!
SO PLEEEEEEEEEEEASE POST SOOON!!!!!!!
p.s
the 2nd chapter was the perfect lenght for your
story! I HATE inu in THIS fanfic! |
Reviewed By: Raven girl On: February 21, 2003 01:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Ohh yummy....looks good....hope your next chapters are longer... |
Reviewed By: mkarlahoney [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
that was really good and one of a kind 2!
now that thats out of the way lets countinue
::coughs::
::kneels::
"PLEASE! i beg of you UPDATE!must read more oh great athour(?) must read MORE!"
::coughs:
::gets up::
well thats all i had to say! great story by the way oh yay have a nice day and i hope you update soon!
::turns and walks away:: |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That second chapter was a GREAT length!
That bastard Inuyasha ... I think I jumped up and down and cheered when Sessy sent him through the tree and again when Kagome performed the million sit assault! ;)
I admit, the authors notes can be confusing ... but I love the information/details they contain, so I don't mind. ^_~
Keep writing this one, me likes. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Hekate On: February 20, 2003 13:55 CST
Comment/Review:
I like your story. It is actually very interesting how you changed Sesshy and Kagome a bit, with regard to their personalities. I find the idea of Vixens, like Sesshy's harem, an interesting one. Your chapters aren't actually that long... I think what you consider a long chapter is actually a perfect length. Keep on writing... |
