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| "Of Phantoms and Death" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: rikkali On: June 18, 2003 10:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhhhhhhh me likies. i loooove how you write schu. grrrrrr...very dead sexy ;P. ohhh Noh huh? i can actually kinda see schu doing some. hehe poor schu had a girls part because of his looks...lol. i liked how you mentioned his smirk being one of the things that made him a well-known villian in his country.hm, what is brad up to? definitly not something good...ohohoho i think it would be cool if he..erm... wanted schu ^______^. i mean, knight likes ran, and so i think it would only be fair that schu haa someone else like him hehe :). i would looooooooove to see ran get jealous and possessive. thats something you see schu do alll the time, but ran never seems does. i dont know, i think it would just make the story be more interesting, and could help show how much they really do care for each other. great, job, plz continue soon! | Reviewed By: skrya On: June 09, 2003 05:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue, you can't just leave me hanging there. Will Ken survive. What's this with Kase, is Crawford really dead? Please update! I really enjoy your fics. | Reviewed By: Kearoru On: February 21, 2003 06:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really, really, really, really liked it. Please continue. I wanna see what happens next!
:big blue puppy dog eyes: | Reviewed By: Sardius [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 01:11 CST
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OMG! I cant believe you used that title! ARGH! I'm all embarassed now! And I only looked up shadow in the dictionary! LOL! Okay, as I've said, it's such a interesting settings, and I love how you wrote Schu. Just can't wait to see how this little ficcy will develop and of course more EWO and IT!!! *hugs* |
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