| "The Carnival" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Kagome_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if you are dissapointed at the father thing then you will need to read on the second ending and then find out how both of them are the father next chapter is going to be called 'family dissapointment' this chapter is when kagomes fam find out |
Reviewed By: angle4u2nv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 15:31 CST
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i have to agree with monkey 86 except for the fuck u part that is sry monkey86 |
Reviewed By: monkey86 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 22:13 CST
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sry about that i can be pretty psychotic sometimes |
Reviewed By: monkey86 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 22:13 CST
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UPDATE!!!!! UPDATE!!!!! UPDATE!!!!! UPDATE!!!!! UPDATE!!!!! UPDATE!!!!! UPDATE!!!!! UPDATE!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!..... oh yea and i hate u for making hojo the dad fuck u : ) bye |
Reviewed By: angle4u2nv [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 17:18 CST
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i loved it update soon k bye |
Reviewed By: Tenna' Tul're san' On: February 26, 2003 20:40 CST
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VERY GOOOD! IF you continue, please tell whose child it is(PLEASE). If u do that thanks. |
Reviewed By: monkey86 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update please :) |
Reviewed By: Kagome_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 13:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi chapter 3 is a little bit worse than what i would call pg-13 it is mildly in between R and PG-13 so if you are disturbed by R rated violence then i recomend chapter 3 veiwers be at least 13-15 yrs. old. the violence is expressed in the way the man is larger than the woman and beats on her when they arent married. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 20:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree very well done keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great work! Mucha cuteness! |
