| "The Fate of Love" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bunny On: March 17, 2003 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is great! Since they took my Inuyasha off tv and put him at the most unreasonable hour, i've been craving something good the read about him and Kagome. I think i've found my new fix! Keep the chapters coming. THAT LEMON BETTER COME SOON OR ELSE! |
Reviewed By: kangel On: March 15, 2003 21:50 CST
Comment/Review:
please update soon!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Dark cat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 15:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
(looks around)Hi please write more. |
Reviewed By: bronie bite On: March 10, 2003 03:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Arigato!!i luved ur fan fic!!
kikyo:how dare u make me go 2 hell without inuyasha?!
bronie bite:shut up u baka!ill send u 2 hell myself!and inuyasha is kagomes!not urs!(walks over 2 kikyo......boom!)
inuyasha:hey wut happened 2 her?
bronie bite:o dont worry inuyasha......shell be very very happy wheres she going ^_~.
bronie bite:n e wayz just hurry up and update
inuyasah:u baka!how dare u talk 2 such a great writer like that?!
bronie bite:im srry dxgirly2-samma (^_^)
JUST E-MAIL ME AT BRONIE BITE@AOL.COM WHEN U FINNISH ANOTHER CHAPTER ARIGATO!!! |
Reviewed By: Crazyinulover On: March 07, 2003 13:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good please finish soon |
Reviewed By: Dragon Girl On: March 06, 2003 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was very good,I really enjoyed it. I gave it a 9 because i thought that the part when he comes back was a little like the beauty and the beast. Other than that, it was awesome! Two thumbs up! |
Reviewed By: DreamStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 14:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it the more and more i read of it. Just keep it up and up date sooooooooooooooon. |
Reviewed By: Chibi Mizu Tenshi On: March 04, 2003 23:05 CST
Comment/Review:
This is really great! I love the descriptive and original word usage. And as much as they tourture all of us, I cannot get enough of cliffhangers. I only wish I were as good at them as you are! Please update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Siren On: March 02, 2003 00:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are the meanest fanfic writer EVER! Jeez! I really want you to hurry and finish, okay?! Email me when you do. LonleySiren@hotmail.com p-please! |
Reviewed By: Bob Villa On: March 02, 2003 00:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE MORE |
Reviewed By: Chi On: March 01, 2003 00:23 CST
Comment/Review:
lol, back again. NOW HURRY!! new chapters are wonderful, darling. ^_^
I do quite enjoy this story... |
Reviewed By: Zerianyu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 00:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey
Contune please i would like to read it. I think your doing fine. The tense changes or whatever don't bother me really unless they make no sense. Lol my story sucks cause it has both or so thats what peole say. Well i LOVE it please contnue. Y our doing fine. |
Reviewed By: Eloy Brightdreamer On: March 15, 2003 18:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey, I like this so far! You've got a good writing style. Might want to go back and edit the first chapter to be in past tense... just to make it all flow better, y'know? Also, you said twice (in the first chapter) that someone "retched" their hand away, when you probably meant "reached." Just a little typo that spell-check won't get.
Again, I'm really enjoying this so far! Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Spike On: February 25, 2003 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, but you kept me hanging twice and now a third time? Oh well, I have to know what happens next so please continue with the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Eva Le Scae On: February 22, 2003 11:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gawd, this wasn't too bad! I felt my heart squeeze at the last lines of chapter two, but don't stop now! Continue? *big pleadie eyes* |
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