| "The Fate of Love" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bob Villa On: March 02, 2003 00:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE MORE |
Reviewed By: Chi On: March 01, 2003 00:23 CST
Comment/Review:
lol, back again. NOW HURRY!! new chapters are wonderful, darling. ^_^
I do quite enjoy this story... |
Reviewed By: Zerianyu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 00:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey
Contune please i would like to read it. I think your doing fine. The tense changes or whatever don't bother me really unless they make no sense. Lol my story sucks cause it has both or so thats what peole say. Well i LOVE it please contnue. Y our doing fine. |
Reviewed By: Eloy Brightdreamer On: March 15, 2003 18:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey, I like this so far! You've got a good writing style. Might want to go back and edit the first chapter to be in past tense... just to make it all flow better, y'know? Also, you said twice (in the first chapter) that someone "retched" their hand away, when you probably meant "reached." Just a little typo that spell-check won't get.
Again, I'm really enjoying this so far! Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Spike On: February 25, 2003 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, but you kept me hanging twice and now a third time? Oh well, I have to know what happens next so please continue with the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Eva Le Scae On: February 22, 2003 11:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gawd, this wasn't too bad! I felt my heart squeeze at the last lines of chapter two, but don't stop now! Continue? *big pleadie eyes* |
Reviewed By: monkey86 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 06:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u cant end it like that now update now!!!!........sry that was what i want to say but its true...SO UPDATE!!!! p.s. i like ur story |
Reviewed By: Dragon Girl On: April 13, 2003 12:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Super cool. I have'nt gotten a chance to go on this site in a while so i decided to read the rest of your story and...it's great! I love it! write more! |
Reviewed By: Kachie-chan On: March 16, 2003 20:16 CST
Comment/Review:
This story is cool!! I can't wait for more!!! |
Reviewed By: Dark cat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Serena On: March 23, 2003 13:44 CST
Comment/Review:
STOP UPDATED THE OLD STORYS SO JUST GET THE NEW CHAPTER UP. I ONLY SEE 7 CHAPTERS AND U SAID THAT I NEW ONE UP ON THE 3/21 |
Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 22:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've read some stories that try to depict the iy/kag romance, and thus far they don't come close to this one.
i have to say so far ch. 7 is my fav...there's so much angst there it's scary but at the same time it's needed to expand the situation into something meaningful, so bravo! update soon! |
Reviewed By: Faelynn On: February 21, 2003 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ugh... *L* ... few typos, no biggie ... I enjoyed reading this... waiting in anticipation for more ... |
Reviewed By: kangel On: March 16, 2003 14:35 CST
Comment/Review:
good so far update soon |
Reviewed By: Syburr Tiger On: March 14, 2003 14:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NNIICCEE!! U wrote in my fav type of writing(cliff hanger)! Pleez continue! I want 2 c what Kagome does to convince Inuyasha!
p.s.~ GREAT STORY! |
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