Reviewed By: Tortie-chu On: June 09, 2003 03:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is rather cool. I liked the part about Kamui finding the elements inside himself and Arashi coming to terms with her feelings. I liked the whole "everyone's crazy for their guy/girl so they're cooking food for them" thing. That's not very original but it does work very well for this story. It's sweet and it has heart. Even the sex had heart. Of course nothing this sweet would EVER happen in X. Too bad really. You're a good writer, you can get characters very well and the plot and pacing are fantastic. You should do your own books sometime. |
