| "Obsession" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: ss10009 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 09:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story. I'm a bit doubtful for an update after four years though...
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Reviewed By: Silver_Sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 14:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry If I didn't updated these days. I've been busy with my work and school. I'll get my own computer in 1 week (I hope... maybe 2, if I'm not lucky!) So I'll be able to go on on my stories. Me and my friend are planning on make a website. Stay tuned!
Silver_Sorc |
Reviewed By: Paige C. On: June 29, 2003 21:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update!!! |
Reviewed By: Vegeta Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 07:29 CST
Comment/Review:
So far I really like this...which is odd because I'm not usually a big Goten/Bra reader..but this fic.
It reads well...I can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't think Gohan would use that kind of language while teasing his brother, especially when he's married and has a kid! Anyway, hurry and update this story really soon, like maybe... tomorrow? |
Reviewed By: Ultima [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 13:53 CST
Comment/Review:
i really enjoyed this and i want to read more, so can u update please. |
Reviewed By: 18 lover 07 On: February 21, 2003 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fanfic but you have to hurry and write more . can't wait to read the next one !!!! you really know how to write a fan fic. |
Reviewed By: 18 lover 07 On: February 21, 2003 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fanfic but you have to hurry and write more . can't wait to read the next one !!!! you really know how to write a fan fic. |
Reviewed By: Yari On: February 21, 2003 10:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Cool story... I'm a bit surprised at Gohan's swearing, it was really funny, though, I can only imagine Chichi running after him with her frying pan for talking like that!LOL...Anyway, Update soon!! |
Reviewed By: gohans_girl_ashia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 22:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no outher words but..........who wow & butiful................. oh and WRITE MORE!!!!!! |
