| "When It Rains...." Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Laina On: June 26, 2003 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a beautifull story, one of the best. |
Reviewed By: SaintMe On: February 25, 2003 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* what can I say? That was absolutely brilliant! The raw emotion was gripping :) really makes ya think that MAYHAPS in the show they actually feel that strongly O_O (though, according to one of my sources... *cries*... Vegeta and Bulma were just a one night stand... at least in DBZ... DBGT isn't even considered here...)
but anywho :) you did a great job! Was a little long for a one shot, but hey ^_^ it was awesome!
you rock!
write another story soon! |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 12:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Only two words are needed to describe your fic...
A MASTERPIECE! |
Reviewed By: Lola_502 On: February 23, 2003 11:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kinda steamy in that last chapter, eh? *lol* Nice work. |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: February 23, 2003 11:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the fic. Nicely written. Can't wait to see more of B/V fics done by you. |
Reviewed By: Kat On: February 23, 2003 10:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Some one bring out a hose! It's a little bit steamy in here...
*lol* I loved your lemon; very tasteful, well written, and HOT! I hope there are more chapters to come, or at least a sequel to this story. It rocked!! |
Reviewed By: HUNNYBUNNY111 On: February 22, 2003 07:32 CST
Comment/Review:
That was really really really really good! OMGsh! I hope u continue this. I'd have to say the ending was the best part though. HEh >D lol well u should finish this story b/c...well it's good. PEACE |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOO!!! Thay can hate each other!!!! *SOBBBBB*
You have made me cry damn it!!!! I LIKE THE FIC! WHAT A RUSH!! *AHEM* Sorry about that I have my sycho moments *WINKS* Anyways please continue and update soon dont leave us like this cause if u dont I"LL HUNT U DOWN AND GUT U LIKE A FISH! *AHEM* pologize again sycho moment! hahaha! Kidding!
Keep up the go work!!!!
Later and hey before I forget
When is the lemon going to be?! :P |
Reviewed By: Megumi On: February 21, 2003 18:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!! well i just thought it was really amzing how u write it :D it's very original cause almost everybody thinks that after buu everythig is happiness
so congrats pplease keep it going ;) |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is cool! I luv how you made each chapter into a songfic! THEORY OF A DEAD MAN IS AWESOME! Their song fit perfectly with it! |
Reviewed By: Onna On: February 21, 2003 09:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...so sad...*cries*...I hope the happy part is near...;_;
Good job! |
