| "Principles know no Love" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: majin vegeta On: October 02, 2003 06:32 CDT
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You know what, u freakin scraed the shit out of me, i swear if u had killed off vegeta id hate u for life you got that!!!!!! And i was expect alot more from this story, next time have some one who can actually write to do your dirty work, lol it should be longer and more detailed, thats all for now. *waves hand of dismissal*
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Reviewed By: majin vegeta On: October 02, 2003 06:31 CDT
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You know what, u freakin scraed the shit out of me, i swear if u had killed off vegeta id hate u for life you got that!!!!!! And i was expect alot more from this story, next time have some one who can actually write to do your dirty work, lol it should be longer and more detailed, thats all for now. *waves hand of dismissal*
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Reviewed By: agent 182 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 15:22 CDT
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GAH!! Kakkarot killed Vegeta? It was kinda confusing but that's what i got. So- so now it's over... jeez. Very good. I loved it and say you're an excellent writer. ^_^ Now i don't have to wait for another chapter because it's over. NOO!! There was some spelling mistakes so you might want to clear that up. ^_^ I loved it and you spelt my "name" wrong... oh well
Agent -182- |
Reviewed By: agent 182 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 01:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. I think it's really funny. Vegeta's sarcam... YOU LEFT A CLIFFHANGER! NNNOO! I really can't wait unil you put up the next chapter i'm dying here. Anyways the idea is so original. Kakkarot was goku-napped. Oh no! I have a feeling that Vegeta knows the Indian cheif and Kakkarot is going to be untied. Vegeta has feelings for Kakkarot i can sence it already. staring at his back and stuff. ^_~. I love it and i hopefully you'll update soon. |
Reviewed By: Christina G. On: June 14, 2003 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh wow. i just love old western romances. and then add in my two favorite
DBZ men and i'm on a happiness overload. when will it get to the romance?
can't wait to see some kissing, groping and lemons between these two. |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: March 24, 2003 07:19 CST
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As always I'm here!!
I like this Anna character, she seems like a tough old lady *go grandma* ~_~;
I'm glad to see the new chapter... I truly am! And thanx loads for the dedication ^_^ It made my day ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: March 09, 2003 09:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll tell you why most people *myself included* think that Vegeta is the leader...
1. You only normally see the name Kakkarot when Vegeta is involved because that's Goku's true name in the Ouji's eyes.
2. Most Kakkarot pairings are with Vegeta.
3. Vegeta has darker skin and the features you described throughout the story.
4. Vegeta was the leader of the Saiya-jins and is sneaky *^_~* and could easily be put into the role of the 'leader' because of his personality in the Dragonball series.
They're the reasons why... and I'm sure there's more that I haven't thought of/written down.
Its was longer... which is good ^_^ I like the whole Kakkarot being kidnapped thing... spices things up a bit ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: February 23, 2003 09:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yep... definitely longer *^_^* that's always a plus... and I know a lot about distrations, that's why I can never finish a story I start *sighs*
I love the dialect that your using for Gipson... very Westony *if that's even a word* @_@; and this fic is quite realistic because there were situations like this all over the west *like I'd know! I don't even live in the US* -_-;;
Well, thanx again for posting... I look forward to the next chapter as always ^_^ So keep at it partner!! *jumps on big pretty white horse and rides into sunset... a cup of java in one hand*
~Winged Revenge~ |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: February 22, 2003 11:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, this is an Alternative Universe so OOCness is perfectly fine... well with me at least ^_^
Yay!! New chapter *I know I should have put this bit first* *ponders*
And I think that developing the characters in a story is very important, and you write it in such a way that it flows and goes along with the story... making it a good and fascinating read... you're a very good author... from what I've seen at least ^_^
Well, it was a little short... but I enjoyed it all the same... all that I need is... more ^_^
*I'm so demanding, but its probably thanx to all the delicious coffee goodness running around my system @_@*
~Winged Revenge~ |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: February 21, 2003 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An original Yaoi story!! *WOW* I can't believe it!!
Finally, something different *bows to you* I really enjoyed this prologue!! SO PLEEEEZE continue!! If not for anyone else, than for me! The humble reviwer *^_^*
And you using Kakkarot instead of Goku... that's great! ^_^ Saiya-jin names are fantastic are they not?
Plus this is kinda like the Saiya-jin Saga, only done differently *well duh* @_@... I loved that Saga, but Vegeta didn't look as attractive *pouts* I like him the best in the Buu Saga, and all the other little saga's that lead up to it and after ^_^
But enough about that ^_^
Thank you very much for posting and I look very forward to seeing the first chapter!! So hurry, hurry, hurry *^_^*
~Winged Revenge~ |
Reviewed By: kitkat On: July 19, 2003 13:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good! you see i've been waiting to read the rest since you said you would go to Italy a while ago. then i got caught up in some business and wasn't able to se if there was an updadte or not. now i see you already put two chapters and i am very glad. please keep writing but i should ask you not to do a "fast job", i mean this story is too good for you to finish it in a hurry. i know you're tired of it and that you are a very good writer (specially because you got agent182 to review, and i'm agent's big fan) so i'm not here to annoy you with pleads for you to continue, i just felt i had to say it. ^^
ok see ya next chapter. oh, and i use to read it on ff.net that's why i never posted any review here. |
Reviewed By: kitkat On: July 19, 2003 13:40 CDT
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hi again, i've just read my review and saw that i actually asked you to "keep writing" even when i said i wouldn't. well let me explain: that "keep writing" has the meaning "don't take too long to update". now i think i made myself clear.
please forgive my english i'm not an english speaking person. |
Reviewed By: agent 182 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nooooo!!! >_< a cliffhanger! Ugh. I loved it and you left a cliff hanger sheesh. I hope Vegeta doesn't get killed but he's one of the main characters so he probably won't. So please update soon. ^_^
Agent -182- |
