| "Coming Together" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sailor Anime On: April 01, 2003 20:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is AWESOME. The only complaint I have is that you sometimes write "and" instead of "an", or similiar situations. Please keep it goin'. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2003 20:50 CST
Comment/Review:
*sobbing* that was so sad! Keep the story up though! I like it!!! |
Reviewed By: YamiDark On: March 29, 2003 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So SAD!WAAAAAAAAA!Please let the stupid dragons ass be kicked.You are doing a great Job.Keep up the good work and finish story please.::Gives you puppy dog eye:: |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: March 27, 2003 20:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff* *sob* OMG!! SO SAD!! Poor Yami... T_T Poor Yuugi-chan too actually. THIS IS REALLY GOOD!PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOON! Arigato! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: March 27, 2003 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff* *sob* OMG!! SO SAD!! Poor Yami... T_T Poor Yuugi-chan too actually. THIS IS REALLY GOOD!PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOON! Arigato! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Insanegoth On: March 23, 2003 15:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Yes finally and Dark and Celtic too thats so great. You know what the dragon thing is making me think though maybe it wasn't all Seto back in egypt maybe the head dragon pushed him a bit??? Hmmmmmmmm maybe monsters feel a bit what their masters do ya know Okay speculation aside that was great write more soon... |
Reviewed By: tenshinostar On: March 22, 2003 14:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Love this fic.
It's getting better and better.
You're a wonderful writer.
Keep it up (^_^). |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 15:57 CST
Comment/Review:
I liked that chapter! I'm glad Yami saved Yuugi! Are the other two dragons going to tell Seto about what happened? Anyway, please post again soon! |
Reviewed By: Yami/Yugi On: March 21, 2003 12:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where does that fuckin' Shidosha get off doin that to Yugi. But I especially happy that the Dark Magician (or Black Magician whatever)and the Celtic Guardian got together. ^___^
And I'm happy that Yami and Yugi are together now too. ^___^ Hurry up and writing another chapter, please. Keep up the good work, kay. |
Reviewed By: AndreAla Rae On: March 18, 2003 18:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^___________^ I am so happy!!!!!!*grabs tissue and blows nose* bout time DM and CG got together!!God i luv them as a couple!! Same wit Yami and Yugi!! Can't wait until u get them bak together!! Well anyhow, i'm enjoyin the story so far!! Can't wait until u get out yet another chapter!! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 17:43 CST
Comment/Review:
That was great! I'm glad Celtic and Dark got together. They make a great couple. I hope Yuugi starts to remember his past and falls in love with Yami again. Post again soon?!! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 22:57 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a good chapter. Funny too! I hope Yuugi gets his memories back soon so that he can be with Yami again. Please post another chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: Insanegoth On: March 13, 2003 18:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Nooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!! You can't do this to poor little Yugi and the hot one (Yami) again they haven't even gotten together again Get the fucking exodia out and kick the goddamn dragons three white butts than seriously bring down fucking Seto's cockiness level to let's say ummmmmmmmmmm zero and you haven't even played out Dark and Celtic's little thingi so unfair don't pleas please please don't kill them again like I said get the goddamn exodia or one of the god cards and kick blue eyes white dragon ass *laughs evilly* give them a few more scars to pine over.... |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 15:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Yea the sequel!!!!!!! I thought you would never write it! YEA!!!!!!!!!! happy dance. This has soooo much angst, I love angst! ooooooh Yugi in lether pants, and Rose petals! sugoi!!!! I am anxiously awaiting the next chappie. |
Reviewed By: Billie Jean On: March 11, 2003 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!!!! It was the enecpecting, though a little bit of speeling corrections, but who cares!?! this story is great!! I give it two thumbs up^-^ |
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