| "Coming Together" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: tenshinostar On: March 08, 2003 14:02 CST
Comment/Review:
It's soooooooooooooooo great. Can't believe you added a few more chapters so quickly. THat is so cool. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Fiji On: March 07, 2003 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story, but did u haveta make seto evil? He's so kewl! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 20:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Good chapter! The grammer and sentence structure could use a little work, but it was still very good! Please post again soon! |
Reviewed By: Eternal Senshi On: March 05, 2003 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh heh, update this!!! Its soo cool! There's everything I want!!! A lil drama, the good fluffy moments, but the best thing is Yami and Yugi!!!! *cuddles Yugi close until he's gasping for air* Update!!! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 12:22 CST
Comment/Review:
This is pretty good. I like it. I hope you add another chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm... me like! poor yami... can seto not be as bad as the other fic? meh.... |
Reviewed By: tenshinostar On: March 01, 2003 13:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. It is getting so good. I hope there is a lot more to come, and hope that Yugi doesn't get torture too much.(^_^) |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 23:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Yay!Good start! |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: February 25, 2003 23:09 CST
Comment/Review:
This fic is so cool! I love it!(Poor Yami with Yuugi not remembering who he is...) PLEASE HAVE MORE!!! REALLY SOON! ^______^ Arigato! Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
sugoi. not bad, even if theres alot of OOC. |
Reviewed By: My Own Shukuun [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 19:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is pretty good so far. Keep it going! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: February 21, 2003 23:20 CST
Comment/Review:
OOOH!! Annoying clifhanger sort of...!!!! PLEASE HAVE MORE NOW!! WANNA READ THIS! It's cool. ^_^ Hope to see more soon! Arigato! Ja ne! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Julie K [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 20:28 CST
Comment/Review:
aaahhh how dare you just write one chapter!!! I loved the first one! That was such neat start. You definatly need to get up more quickly! I can't wait to see what Yugi's reaction to this is! Hurry please! |
Reviewed By: Death Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 19:45 CST
Comment/Review:
It's a sequal!!!!! ^_^ More! |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 18:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Woah. You HAVE to keep writing! I loved Lover's Duel, and so I have high hopes for this one, make me proud!
Kani~ Nevermind her, she gets carried away. Nice work tho. |
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