| "Coming Together" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 21:08 CDT
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That was a great ending for this story! I liked it! Great job! |
Reviewed By: Angel Divinity [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
never got to finish my sentance before! Yes so the next ficcie should be Change makes a difference or Love is Unexplainable ^.^! |
Reviewed By: Angel Divinity [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your ficcie! Great ending!! I think the next ficcie you should write is either Change can make a difference o |
Reviewed By: Rain Tenshi On: April 17, 2003 17:11 CDT
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Great ficcie!!! My vote?? Changing Makes a Difference |
Reviewed By: DemonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2003 10:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWW! SUCH A CUTE STORY!! You're such a good writer! |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: April 07, 2003 23:05 CDT
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Wow...interesting plot twist. Hmm really. Poor Yuugi and Yami-yikes.. Anyways I hope you update fast! Arigato!
Y+Y4EVER! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 19:46 CDT
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That was definetly unexpected. I didn't think Yami would switch with him. Poor Yami and Yuugi! I hope you post more soon! I want to see what torture you put them through next. How are they going to deal with Shidosha? Is Yuugi going to develop any magickal powers to help? |
Reviewed By: tenshinostar On: April 05, 2003 15:18 CST
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Great job so far. I hate that dragon though. I hope he gets punish real good. Is Seto and Joey going to be a couple? Just wondering.
Keep it up. |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 18:54 CST
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Poor Yuugi! Mean Shidosha! I hope you post more soon! Sorry for not commenting sooner, but I haven't been online for about a week or so. Anyway, post soon! |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 14:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooooooo update udate. I really like this stroy and can't wait for you tto update |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 11:33 CST
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Great chapter! I'm glad Yami and Yuugi are together now. I hope they find a way to beat Shidosha. He's just mean. Anyway, post more soon! |
Reviewed By: ^_^ On: April 03, 2003 13:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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It`s WONDERFUL!!!! Keep writting more!!! |
Reviewed By: =^.^= On: April 02, 2003 15:52 CST
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It`s SO SO COOL!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! It`s wonderful to see Yami and Yugi together!! It`s so cute!! Your fanfiction show`s it so well!! Go on!! We`re all here with you!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Sailor Anime On: April 01, 2003 20:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is AWESOME. The only complaint I have is that you sometimes write "and" instead of "an", or similiar situations. Please keep it goin'. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2003 20:50 CST
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*sobbing* that was so sad! Keep the story up though! I like it!!! |
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