| "Save Me From the Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: the shadow girl On: June 02, 2003 21:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update your story if it not over. if you can can you make it a little bit longer. |
Reviewed By: Yami_Inuyasha On: March 24, 2003 15:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there I think that this fic is really good. You should try not to skip around so much though. Try to stay in one are. Don't go from one area and then instantly be 3years later. If you do this then you would be a pretty good author. |
Reviewed By: hikariangel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 12:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is what I think of it. Keep going! Never mind the assholes that don't like it or any of your other stories. |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 19:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Not bad. I hope you add another chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: stupid kid04 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 18:19 CST
Comment/Review:
*Sweat drop* I thought this was familiar!!! It's on fanfiction.net!
I knew that... |
Reviewed By: MoonGirl On: February 25, 2003 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this Story very much please continue. I also like it that you made Yami (a little) evil. |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 17:46 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a little quick. Them meeting and becoming friends and all. I hope you can post the next chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: kit-kat On: February 23, 2003 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this rocks
please do pair #4 or i will hunt you down |
Reviewed By: Kye On: February 23, 2003 03:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I like the story sofar, so please continue soon.
Oh and I vote for Yugi/Yami, Ryou/Bakura, Joey/Seto, and Malik/Marik.^_^ |
Reviewed By: Death Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 21:28 CST
Comment/Review:
MORE!!!! |
Reviewed By: My Own Shukuun [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 20:28 CST
Comment/Review:
It's a cute story. And Yami... meow! I like the Yami/Yugi couple, and Ryou/Bakura is a good one too.
Keep up the good work! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 13:26 CST
Comment/Review:
This is pretty good. I like this. As for the couples I think you should have: Yami/Yugi, Seto/Joey, Dark Magician/Blue Eyes, and Ryou/Bakura. |
Reviewed By: Saphirerose On: February 22, 2003 12:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this. Also I like all the pairings, so I don't want you to change them. Anyway keep up the good work and I can't wait for more. |
Reviewed By: SK8ER_PUNK_CHIC [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 10:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice! please leave me a comment on one of my fanfictions some time! my sn on mm.org is how i signed this. please read my "Falling Is Like This" story. brother incest between Karl and Thomas Shubaltz. ^^ please read it! I would aprecciate ur feebak! |
Reviewed By: Kirikou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 05:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Well I don't know about the other couples but......*chibi eyes* Yami and Yugi are so cute together ^^
Anyways, it's a nice story...and it's about time someone made Yami(a little)evil, that was so cute!!!
*hops while yami Kiri appears*
YamiK: Never mind my light....she's just high on sugar -_-x *grabs mallet and chases Kiri* |
