| "Holiday Memories and Nightmares" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Title: Me likes!
Reviewed By: Summoner Rekka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! An abuse fic that's NOT all... like everbody else's! Yeah, Jack got what he deserved. PERSONALLY I would have Yami and Gen push him off a cliff and break everbone in his body, then trap him for eternity, but that's just me. Anger management never helps ::sweatdrop:: Hee, hee, WB is a goooood kitty. Loved how you portrayed the parents too! Write another fic. Warlords please... Oni is so pretty. 0__o
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Reviewed By: Zani [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was just plain awesome. |
Reviewed By: Destiny's lot On: April 21, 2003 08:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, it's over...
Great story lots of drama. I like the ending, especially the payback, he deserves that pain and you wrote it so well. Can't wait for your next story. |
Reviewed By: amnestia On: April 16, 2003 10:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This chapter is very well done and very life like.My friend was in the same situation and still had horrible nightmares years after. |
Reviewed By: PygmalionClay On: April 13, 2003 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually stay away from abuse fics because the characters tend to be cliched and written completely unrealistically. All the characters in this fic are well fleshed out (except maybe the charicatured villan). I'm glad, especially, that Seiji is actually going through the motions of recovery instead of bouncing back. Can't wait for the epilogue. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: amnestia On: April 10, 2003 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very good chapter!I do like how Seiji didn't blame his family. *dances* more please? |
Reviewed By: amnestia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very good,i do see him blaming himself rather than his parents.More please!:) |
Reviewed By: Destiny's lot On: April 08, 2003 22:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
I agree Seiji would take all of the blame onto himself. Great chapter I'm glad you guys are writing again.
Ja ne |
Reviewed By: NightShadow On: March 29, 2003 22:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was GREAT!!!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: amnestia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! *blink* the fighting section was kinda short but everything else was very well done.I will be back to read more! |
Reviewed By: Destiny's Lot On: March 20, 2003 04:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yes I loved it. And what a goooood kitty.
But only a few more chapters awww! Oh well I'm sure you guys will come up with another terrific story. Ja ne |
Reviewed By: amnestia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!I'm at a loss for words....great job! |
Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 23:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Excellant! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 00:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great! You do Seiji torture so well. Really looking forward to the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: amnestia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 00:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cant wait for the next chapter! |
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