| "Sleepless Night" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
| Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 > » ] |
Reviewed By: dadada [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 16:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
update please...love the story
|
Title: Sleepless Night
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
|
Reviewed By: paxydust On: June 28, 2005 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
your style if kinda common but the flow and originality of the story blew me away you are such a talented writer you should work on your sentences and proof read before finalizing today I read all nine and other than wrong or not placed words it was excellent so next time work on your sentence forming and your garunteed a 10 in my book %] sorry if i was to harsh if you have anything you would like to speak with me about concerning my review e-mail me @paxydust16@yahoo.com
|
Title: Sleepless Night
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 15:20 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
|
Title: Sleepless Night
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 19:26 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
|
Title: Good
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 23:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story. Update soon. Would like to see what happens next.
|
Reviewed By: Taikyoukai-sama On: December 26, 2003 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your spelling & grammer sucks.But who cares? *lol* Your all most as bad as me.*lol* any ways.....I love this story,verry creative!
|
Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 09:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The spelling and grammer mistakes make it little confusing and hard to read but the plot is wonderful!! Just work on those two things and keep updating!!
|
Reviewed By: Nazuma Neiko On: September 22, 2003 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this ficcy very much. But you need an editor. BIG TIME! I won't bi**h to you about the *hack grammer& spelling hack* Other wise Bravo!
|
Reviewed By: ccinjapan On: July 03, 2003 14:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
its intersting so far but i think u should makethe chapters longer..but everything else is fine..just keep writing!! |
Reviewed By: Anonymous On: June 27, 2003 14:21 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
Erm, you need to work on your spelling and grammar... Yep. Anywho, update! ^__^ 'Tis a good story so far. |
Reviewed By: Sesshomarulover On: June 26, 2003 00:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it; its one of my favorites. So you have to finish it as soon as you can, PLEASE. You have a very creative idea, I love it.
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!
LOVE THE STORY SO FAR!!! |
Reviewed By: KANGEL On: March 25, 2003 12:53 CST
Comment/Review:
BRAVO BRAVO *CRYING* PLEASE WRITE MORE BUT DON'T LET THAT *ASS* NARKU RAPE KAGOME |
Reviewed By: paperheart [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update please please please, i wnat to know what happens!!!! GAH...:::DIES from not knowing!:::
:::comes back to life::
PLEASE UPDATE!!!
:::dies again:::
~yesyperson~ |
Reviewed By: bise b On: March 10, 2003 18:53 CST
Comment/Review:
hey.
i just wanted to let you know something. you spelled 2 words wrong several times. the words you put were "sense and safe". well you had the right thinking but not the right words. the words are suppose to be scent and save. he smells her "scent" and Kouga wants to "save" Kagome. i just thought that you might have wanted to know that. ok?! bye bye |
| Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 > » ] |
