| "The Domanatrix" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: XxxInukuraXxX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 13:38 CDT
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AH! ut oh...post the chapter!
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Reviewed By: Shadowmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 04:00 CDT
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Whoops... Sorry about the excessive posting of reviews. The damned thing kept sticking. Well, I still want to read more of it. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Shadowmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 03:59 CDT
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xD hehehe... Malik and Seto, watch out, she can get a bit rough on you two. xD I want to see the next chapter but it's been a while since you've written it. I want to read more of it. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Shadowmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 03:57 CDT
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xD hehehe... Malik and Seto, watch out, she can get a bit rough on you two. xD I want to see the next chapter but it's been a while since you've written it. I want to read more of it. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Shadowmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 03:57 CDT
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xD hehehe... Malik and Seto, watch out, she can get a bit rough on you two. xD I want to see the next chapter but it's been a while since you've written it. I want to read more of it. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Codie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 05:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well that was...uh...wow..umm I didnt really expect that. And now that Setos joined. This should make things more interesting. cant wait till you update |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl On: March 10, 2003 08:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want to thank you for reviewing the fall of icarus for me. I can't believe ffnet took it off, but it's fans that support me that makes the difference. Thank you for making me feel better. i update the fall of icarus every day, so watch for updates when you can. sometimes i tend to go nuts and update 3 chappies a day. |
Reviewed By: Spirit King Yami On: March 03, 2003 11:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU HAVE PUT THE PERFECT TWIST TO THIS STORY! I WILL NEVER LOOK AT SETO AND MALIK THE SAME AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!! THIS STORY KICKS ASS AND I CANNOT WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT INSTALLMENT! |
Reviewed By: LITTLE WASHU On: March 01, 2003 05:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
a good story that keeps you reading on. i had a sample of the start of this story from the author,and the complete story is just as good. as a third person view, the story is good. through the charater actions and movements one can almost see the charaters mind and thoughts...as far as a story of lust and sultry desierses, ti is quite enjoyable... |
Reviewed By: Malice Mizer On: March 01, 2003 00:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ryo>>That was a spine tickling tale, I would probally act as malik did. A very sexy story. I wish something like that would happen to me, especialy that Ryoko string thingy part! --Good work keep it up.
Love- Malice Mizer, (Mike)
"Some of us just don't want the fantasy to end..." |
Reviewed By: pysche On: February 24, 2003 22:56 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
RYO-CHAN YOU RULE!!!! lol its addictive! you uh... mispelled some words oO;; don't hurt me... it was funny though!!!! |
Reviewed By: Shadowmoon On: February 24, 2003 22:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One word to describe this fanfic: damn. I think Ryoko even scares me. This fic is great and I can't wait for the next chapter to come up. :) |
Reviewed By: Patrick On: February 22, 2003 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a very interesting famfic. |
Reviewed By: ruby queen of evil [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 13:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
malik drools all over her new shirt
ryoko more drooling.....
coll fun and sexxy as always but u dont need me to tell ya that |
Reviewed By: tenchiryoko23 On: February 24, 2003 23:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very cool story i loved it! Cant wait to see more!! Ryoko is the shit! and your a very good writer! Well cya later!
RYOKO YOUR COOL!! |
