"Bundle of Joy" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Mekia On: August 23, 2003 23:59 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: please write the sequel soon i want to read it. |
Reviewed By: Mekia On: July 25, 2003 18:14 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: please write your sequel soon I want to read it |
Reviewed By: Katzztar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2003 16:22 CDT Comment/Review: Hi there, the author here! yes I am planning to write a sequel. It will be called 'Leap of Faith'. Unfortunately it takes MM.O forever to upload and therefor problems in downloading. So until the site fixes that I will not be able to post here. Everything will be posted at fanfiction.net. |
Reviewed By: Mekia On: May 25, 2003 13:04 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love this story!!! please write more!!! i'll be checking everyday!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: vegetasmoon On: March 10, 2003 05:39 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I know who it is!! I know who it is!! only cause katz is my best friend ! I've read last chapter! you will all be surprised! |
Reviewed By: ladyKalaNag On: March 09, 2003 08:11 CST Comment/Review: please write another chapter before the last chapter. this fic is really good please write more i think i no who the people are its a lil too obivious. but y does the husband have a tail i think he is inuyasha but he doesnt have a tail please let the couple be Kagome and inuyasha and dont surprise us and change it, please dont |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 22:08 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Beautiful ficcie. I luv it! It's very nice!
And for the ending, I wouldn't mind reading it now
and skipping the next chapter. I'm anxious to see
what will happen. |
Reviewed By: princess-of-anime-kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 21:35 CST Comment/Review: its great so far and I'd LOVE it if u added another chappy before the final, He's such a nice husband to his preggy wife, i want one tooh ;-; If she doesnt want him can i have him?? lol, atleast he didnt agree with her when she said she looked like a whale... anyways, GREAT WORK! |
Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 21:20 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i'd like to see another chapter before the last chapter.
your story is so KAWAII!!! and i have a good idea who the happy couple is, and if it's not who i think it is well then bravo for giving me the slip.
can't wait for updates! |
Reviewed By: musechan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 19:24 CST Comment/Review: This is abosolute sweet. It's so romantic too. The mystery husband is so considerate, and sooo.. Awwwwwwww. I don't even know If I can answer your question, because it's going so well. But if you truly want to add another piece, by all means go right ahead. I'm sure it'll be good either ways. |
Reviewed By: ennovymoon On: March 08, 2003 19:16 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Who is he!!
Who is she!!
Tell me! Tell me!
I have a feeling who they r but I need to know 4 sure!!
Update soon!
Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 23:19 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Bravo I certainly hope that my husband will talk to me like that if I ever get pregnat this is the cutes story ever please update soon |
Reviewed By: musechan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 17:19 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I am deeply enjoying this. I wonder how the mystery father is going to act, and I'm wondering how the baby will look. Tell the mysterious parents I want to be godmother. LOL, no but seriously it's really good so far. |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 15:52 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I hope the Misteryous demon freaks out when the baby is born it would be really funny |