| "Changes of Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: shadowdragon85 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY SHIT!! You are Wrong... way wrong. Though that does make for a good plot line. Well I can't wait till the next chapter is posted.
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Reviewed By: ruki On: January 17, 2005 10:13 CST
Comment/Review:
are you freakin kidding me?! where's the rest dang it?!?!?!
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Title: O.o
Reviewed By: Summoner Rekka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, wow... I had a feeling about Ryo... Hmm, I'm confused as to WHY he's now... like that. Vera, vera, niiice. I like the Anubisu/Seiji pairing better. Go, go, go! Please update sooon. I'm tinging with anticipation!
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Reviewed By: Serenity Wildfire On: July 23, 2003 04:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so sad when I started reading this! My Ryo was so MEAN!!!!! Waaaaaa. Any whoo.... once I learned he was possessed it was all OK. The only real problem I have with this fic is that Anubis doesn't have blue hair, any facial scars, and his weapon isn't a sword. That description is another warlord...although I don't recall his name. Anubis is the warlord with red hair, and a sort of chained sickle as a weapon. He is also the first warlord to go to the good side, later becoming the Ancient and sacrificing his life for Kyura's later. This mix-up was quite confusing in the beginning, but I worked past it. Other than that this is a wonderful story! Keep it up. |
Reviewed By: raven13x [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 21:39 CDT
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i like this fic. please continue it. can't wait until seiji figures out who anubis is. |
Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 23:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far. I like the idea of Badamon possessing Ryo and another Annubis/Seiji pairing a lot. Looking forward to more chapters. |
