| "The Colour Purple" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Lina Inverse [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A bit short, but brilliant. I love Isabella (but then again.... I love Yukari too. And Miwako. And Arashi. And George. Hehe. I just love the whole cast! Except for the minor characters. But I digress...). I think it could have been made a little more clear, but I didn't get confused about what you were trying to say for more than a few seconds, so it certainly isn't hard to read. I'm just giving a suggestion if you want your fic to go from great to absolutely amazing.
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: HotsummerYami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmm. I thought that was very good. How you made Isabella's thoughts. That was good. It really sounds like her. That's what I have to say. Good job!
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Reviewed By: MiyutheStrange [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I too, stumbled across this predicament, and have taken it upon myself to write a Parakiss Fic. I'm writing it as I type this. Hopefully I will be able to post it soon.
I enjoyed reading yours and hopefully we get to see more Parakiss fics from you and from all the other fans out there.
-Miyuki |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 02:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd have to say I agree with the limit of fanfics on this section and as much as I would love to add some I can write if it were to save my own life so ya know how that works. Anyways I thought you captured Isabella's thoughts perfectly. I wish I could get the fourth book! But technically Borders sux at stocking anime...Anyways maybe and hopefully the book will become more popular so there can actually be some fanfiction here. |
Reviewed By: T_Rocket [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 17:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:D You're RIGHT! There SHOULD be more ParaKiss fanfics out there. And for the record, you did a wonderful job of capturing what it is to be Isabella. Poor thing needs more screen time in the manga...
Well, keep up the good(such an understatement) work!
T-chan |
Reviewed By: T_Rocket [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 17:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:D You're RIGHT! There SHOULD be more ParaKiss fanfics out there. And for the record, you did a wonderful job of capturing what it is to be Isabella. Poor thing needs more screen time in the manga...
Well, keep up the good(such an understatement) work!
T-chan |
