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| "Best Wishes, Gojyo" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 > » ] | Title: i hope i aint too late
Reviewed By: Sayoko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 20:26 CDT
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anou... about footnote [3]: hanyou are said to be capable of male pregnancy. how convenient!!! ^_^ i'd love cho and sha floor sanzo with news that the burly red-haird cassanova is pregnant, and by no less than mild-mannered youkai hakkai!
| Reviewed By: Paisley On: July 09, 2004 10:19 CDT
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Hello, I am Paisley. I am a bit young (only 15) to be reading lemons and what not, but I only read Gojyo X Hakkai pairings and mostly because I love seeing a romantic aspect of their relationship. I have loved the Gojyo X Hakkai pairing since I first saw Saiyuki back in December, not even knowing they used to live together or anything like that. So I thought it was kind of funny. But besides all that, I too (try, and miserably fail. ^__^) write Gojyo X Hakkai fanfiction and I read them addictively. And I must say I admire your work so much! I write my fanfiction while keeping yours and other fanfiction writer's styles in my mind and you are truly one of my favorite Gojyo X Hakkai authors! Sometimes I feel almost privlaged to read your work. A few days ago when reading Fateful Encounters I spent the whole day reading it, not doing anything and I even cried during it. I just wanted to say I really admire your writing and one day I hope I can get as good as you. If you want to read my fanfiction, i'm KawaiiLilMarron on fanfiction.net. Thank You,
| Reviewed By: melaniesoong [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 18:06 CDT
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As with your other stories that I've read so far, I really enjoyed this a lot. It has probably already been said before, but the guy Sanzo dreamed about - the scarred, one-eyed one - was Farfarello from WK, right? ^___^
| Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 01:06 CST
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Oooooh man ... I know better ... I really do. I knew I shouldn't have read over the previous reviews. It's just that they're, so amusing sometimes. Unfortunately, you apparently had a flamer? whatever ... in the works early on. Although he seems to have ... corrected? (or elaborated on) some of his earlier statements. I'm sorry you had to deal with that. I think that for an "AU/OOC" story, this one follows real close to the original and considering the lengths at which our "lovers" go to be discreet, could easily conform to the original. Eh, some are gonna have trouble swallowing that, but hey, it's the way I see it. Never let anyone bully you into writing something you don't want to or in a way you don't want to. From the looks of it, there are a lotta folks that would agree with me on that. Anyone that doesn't like your style alwys has the option of clicking on a different link or just plain going elsewhere to read something else. I think you do a hell of a job with your writing and I'd like to read more of it. The "safe sex" disclaimer was a hoot. Can youkai even GET std's? Guess it depends on the writer, ne? LOL, would seem to me after seeing some of them on the show they'd be more apt to GIVE one than get one ^_~ (that comment doe not include Kougaiji or Jien (so much easier than Duko-whats-its) by the way) ^_^ Oh yeah ... you managed to shoot down my balloon a bit when you said that the character that Sanzo was dreaming of wasn't a "real" character. From the description you gave, I figured you were referring to Homera's sidekick, Kenon. Sorry, but THAT coulda gotten interesting since Homera seems to be an outcast even in the gods' world. Ah well ^_^ I look forward to your updates, especially in the arc series! Just keep doing what it is you do, and I'll keep coming back and reading it!
| Reviewed By: Travellyr On: August 24, 2003 22:23 CDT
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I repeat.... what _very_ nice lemons. It probably shows my sick sense of humor in that I was cackling in delight most of this afternoon.
I just want you to know that I woke up after spending all night and most of the morning reading "Fateful Encounters" and then spent the next eight hours reading the three lemons. ^^;; I had to read them offline, because that was the only way my brother would have spared my life. He'd have killed me if I'd monopolized the connection THAT LONG.
I really look forward to seeing if you come out with anything else in Saiyuki. Almost as much as I look forward to Saiyuki DVD releases. H_H | Reviewed By: Arashi On: June 27, 2003 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic! Gojyo and Hakkai are soo cute together. What's going to happen to Hakkai, though? Please please please update! ^_^ | Reviewed By: Carter Tachikawa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 11:42 CST
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Well, the last couple of times, I was blathering away at kipperdude below. (And kipperdude, pal, if you were to have said the same things to E-sama through email...or even email me, I'm a writer here too, you know...that's when you'd be gutsy! Retorting here just makes you look like an idiot who wants attention to both, the author and everyone else. Mind you, you started the pointless exercise, not me. Oh yeah, and a degree does not qualify you to act like an asshole. Like I said, E-sama will write what he wants, how he wants, and update when he wants but he is under no obligation to write a fanfic to please you and a few others who don't like them.)
Anyway, an actual review...I liked it as always! I got into Saiyuki because of you, you know. Wonderful and sweet. Keep it up and I look forward to more of NT as well as everything else!
~CT | Reviewed By: paxnirvana On: March 17, 2003 11:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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E-sama, I've already left you feedback once, but here's more. Please don't take this troll's comments to heart. Some people like to get attention, apparently, by flaming others. I don't intend to continue this thread too much further but I wanted to say something public here as well.
Please, please, please keep up the great work! There are many styles of writing out there, as many as there are authors. Personally, I find reading a variety of styles helps me appreciate the truly skilled authors (like you) more. And helps *me* to grow as a writer. The more you read... the more you know.
One of the JOYS of fanfiction (not canon, kipperdude, but FANfiction) is the different angles and impressions and twists that people bring to the characters. If one is slavishly interested in just the canon stuff, then one should never freakin' READ fanfiction - I don't know about you, but I don't just want the same shit regurgitated back at me over and over, I want different stuff. I *enjoy* seeing how OTHERS view the same characters... I enjoy seeing how others play with them... the hoops they put them through... and how true they stay to the *fanfic* author's interpretation of them (something E-sama is very, very good at!). It's part of the FUN of fanfic. If I wanted only the 'true' characters, then I'd read Minekura's manga and ignore everything else... because not even the anime is actually Minekura's characters. Get a grip on the medium here, please.
Read what you like. Move on if it's not your cup of tea, dude, and let it go. If you have specific issues with a story, say so. Broad-spectrum flaming of an author is just in extremely poor taste. What fails to surprise me, sadly, is how intolerant people can be - and how cruel. And if you are 'educated' enough to throw it up at us later as some kind of justification, why the HELL did you say that shit in the first place? *sigh*
I'm done. Keep on writing, E-sama. There are people who love and respect you too. Please remember us. | Reviewed By: toxictattoo On: March 14, 2003 09:43 CST
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Your usual good writing E. Well done. It was enjoyable to see the roles reversed and how you had each character handle it.
You also handle the aftermath very well too. So many times with authors (and I'm guilty of this) its slam, bam and the fic ends. You tie up the loose ends nicely and don't allow it to end abruptly. Sort of easing us down instead of letting us collaspe onto the floor. | Reviewed By: Yanagi-sen On: March 06, 2003 23:19 CST
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Wonderful... I've already told you... but I'll say it again! ^_^ | Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: March 05, 2003 21:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WWWWWoooaaahhhhh,...i LLLoooovvveeeeee this chapter lemon scene,....*drools*....hakai as seme is quite SSSSeeexxxxxyyyyyyy,...me Liiiiikkkeeeee,....*drools*....and gojyo as an uke is VVVVeeerrrryyyyyyyy HHHHHoooottt,....he takes it just like the MMMaaannnllyyyyy man he is,....SSSSooooooooooooooooo YYYuuummmmyyyyy,...*lickin lips*....keep-up the good work,...and be sure to write more seme hakai/uke gojyo lemon scenes in the next few up-coming chapters,...continue soon kay,...till then,..JJJJaaaaaaaaaaaaaa and GGGaaaanbbbbaaatteeeeeee-Neeee!!^.~!! | Reviewed By: oogy boogy On: March 04, 2003 04:42 CST
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I like this fic, so far, but a some of the time I find it a bit difficult to swallow.
that is how you give a critique, not telling the author how much they have ruined your life.
telling someone that they are writing bad porn and to imply that they are following around you to ruin your enjoyment of a series is not a critique. the hard, designed to be hurtful, tone gives it the boost of a flame.
if you flame, you can expect the same in return. period.
the fine art to giving a critique is to offer up the things you thought worked as well as the things you didn't. kipperdude didn't do either in his/her first 'statement'. he/she just made a blanket statement of 'this sucks'.
if he/she had said the things originally that were said in his/her followup, things would be different. he/she does offer up the things that he/she didn't like.
but to just 'complain'? poor form and shows a degree if immaturity even for all protests of a college degree.
i may not agree with the authors characterizations, nor may i not like the overly purple prose-y use of terms of endearment. but i appreciate that he takes great care in presenting a finished, polished product. i do like the way his phrasing runs in his stories, his descriptions are rich and vivid.
in reading something new of his, either it clicks in the first couple of paragraphs or it doesn't. but i don't feel the need to beat him with that. i Just. Don't. Read.
i will leave comments that i think its great (and try to point out what I thought was good and what i thought could use some work) or i go about my business. there are far too many fics out there to read for me to waste my time on bashing an author because they happen to not write the way "i" like stuff to be written.
get a grip. life is too short. | Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: March 02, 2003 10:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WWWWooooHHHooooo,....gojyo gona get LLLaaaaiiiiidddddddd,....*giggles*...
continue soon kay,...can't wait how
gojyo birthday gona turn-out,...more
SSSwweeeettttt-and-hot-LLLooooovvinnnnn is comin-up
next for our birthday-boy Neee??...*hentai grins*....keep-up the good work,...till next chapter,..JJaaaaaaaaaaaaaa and GGaaaaanbbbaaatteeeeeee-Neeeee!!^.~!! | Reviewed By: don't want to give one On: March 02, 2003 09:01 CST
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Um, sorry about butting in where it's none of my business, but... There are times when I don't like E-sama's characterization. I like this fic, so far, but a some of the time I find it a bit difficult to swallow. I don't agree with how kipperdude made his/her(?) complaint known, but I just wanted to say something so that you know it's not just one person who doesn't like a part of the fiction. Something was said somewhere about E-sama's potential to grow as an author, so that's part of the reason why I'm speaking up, because if you just dismiss something because it was said rudely, you miss the truth that could be in it.
Uh . . . don't hate me. Please. That said, I really do like this fic! I hope you continue it soon! ^_^
PS: I didn't want to give my name or email address just in case you think this is a flame because I'm partly agreeing with kipperdude - I don't want this to come across as a flame, but you might have taken it the wrong way. Um... yeah. Running away now... Sorry for bothering you... | Reviewed By: toxictattoo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 06:28 CST
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E - like everyone else I apologize for using your comments section to speak to someone else.
kipperdude. I am somewhat perplexed by the bad porn comment. One of the appreciated things about E-sama's fics is his lyrical expression.
If you have been in the GW fandom for any length of time, then you have no doubt been subjected to writing by 'squeeing' fangirls who write formulaic fics to what amounts to truly bad porn.
Being a gay porn afficionado (what can I say, it comes with being a gay man), I fail to see how E's writing can be equated to bad porn. Certainly my love for the most loathsome of expressions (according to some people) has garnered me my share of 'you write gay porn, you suck' comments.
Well, I do write my fanfiction with an eye to the gritter side of gay male sex. So sue me...[shrugs]
I wouldn't mind continuing this conversation off line of the comments section. You can click on my name (I am a member of mediaminer.org) to get my email address if you are interested. | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 > » ] |
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